Great update! I really enjoyed the vivid imagery of Shaun's frat boy days, and Shaun's mom and Larry coming to support Shaun through this difficult time. Poor Zach, getting caught in Jeanne and Alan's troubles! I'm hooked on this story! I can't wait to see it continue!
Glad you enjoyed it! This was a fun part to write (and the next interlude as well) and you just gotta know Shaun and Martin would both have been a little wild in college no matter how calm (relatively) they are now.
Argh, I so thought they were going to kiss in this one! I love the typical frat-boy banter--very well written! I'm really enjoying seeing this background story unfolding.
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New parts are up now.
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As usual, can't wait for more!
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More parts are up now.
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