Sorry for not commenting on the other chapters, but I've been out of town for a while. How awful that Zach's in danger because of his sister's boyfriend! And how sweet of Shaun to bid for Martin at the auction .
I'm hoping that Cody's memory and drawings will help get them closer to finding Zach, since I don't think that scuzzball boyfriend is going to be too cooperative about helping Zach out. And I love how supportive Shaun's mother and step-father are, but I really, really love watching the wheels turning in Danny's mind .
arghhhh! I am sooo mad at Zach's sister and her boy toy... lol I just have to take deep breaths and remember that it's just a fic:p lol Cody was adorableeeeeeee as always:) Thank goodness in the video you couldn't see the kidnapping, it spared Shaun of bad images... waiting for more:) and thanks for sharing
The longer Zach is stuck with his horrible captors and away from the safety and love of his home and family, the more this tugs at my heart. Poor Zach! Great interlude- even back then Shaun was a guy who took what he wanted. I am hooked on this story, no doubt about it!
I'm glad you're hooked! That means you'll come back even when I am slow to update (real life has been sucky lately so...eep) Shaun's always seemed to me to be determined and confident which is a good thing cause Martin would never have made the first move!
Aack, I'm sorry, I am so late with feedback! I'm still loving this story, though. I'm bracing myself for Zach's situation to get worse, and I feel so bad for Shaun, not knowing what's going on. The dynamic between Shaun, Martin, and Danny is really interesting, and I can't wait to see where it goes. I wonder if Danny will ever find out about Shaun and Martin's history ...
And, as much as I love Zach and Shaun together and imagine them being together forever, I am addicted to this Shaun and Martin story! This chapter was so freaking hot! Once again, can't wait to see what happens next!
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I'm hoping that Cody's memory and drawings will help get them closer to finding Zach, since I don't think that scuzzball boyfriend is going to be too cooperative about helping Zach out. And I love how supportive Shaun's mother and step-father are, but I really, really love watching the wheels turning in Danny's mind .
Thanks for sharing.
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Glad you're enjoying this so far, I'm really having fun with it (when I actually do write that is...ack) Should be some more parts up soon.
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And, as much as I love Zach and Shaun together and imagine them being together forever, I am addicted to this Shaun and Martin story! This chapter was so freaking hot! Once again, can't wait to see what happens next!
Update soon! :)
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I should be posting more soon, and I have more to go off to my beta's soon too...argh. i should hurry, huh?
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