Dragon Smoke

[dragontory]

Title: Dragon Smoke
Rating: G
Pairing: slight GRi
Word Count: 671
Genre: Angst-ish
Disclaimer: Nope.. I don't think you can own people. ;)

Comments

[dragontory]

Hey! Thanks for reading and commenting. lol, not sure what to say. Quitting - easier said than done right D:

[cuz_im_a_vip]

I really like this! I don't know why, its such a short drabble but I like the interaction between Ji and Ri. I just reallly like this xD You should right more of these. Lol I love G-Ri but cant write for crap

[dragontory]

I'm glad you like it! I'm all for the short drabbles because I have a short attention span lol! -.-' you should try writing anyway of you have an idea/inspiration :D have you written anything?

Oh, I will try and write more of these, still hoping to make this a series of drabbles/oneshots. I adore GRi, it's just so beautiful :')

[pinkelatta]

dragon smoke. u make it sound romantic. i'd go to hell if i could just breathe in a little of that secondhand dragon smoke.

[dragontory]

Thanks for commenting :) I'm glad it does sound a little romantic because I felt that too. DamnJi makes everything look cool, even mushroom hair lol.
Speaking of romantic I just read your fic but I'll comment over there >_>

[41551947105]

‘Your logic - it’s flawless.’ <3

When I was in korea I noticed most koreans don't quite grasp the concept of sarcasm -at least, not those that I met-, they always took everything I said dead serious (caused some pretty funny situations). I do think Seungri might be one of the few that gets it~ xD

I like this one most of all of your work so far. Not sure if it's because of the way it is written, or the fact that this little piece of plot appeals to me the most. It's bitter in the way Jiyong keeps pushing Seunghyun away right to the end, the only comfort found in the fact that it does, somewhere, affect him. But even that doesn't really 'solve' anything, or serves to make you feel better. I like that kind of realism, where at the end of the story... you're kind of in the same situation as in the beginning. You learn a lot, but you don't get anywhere with it... if that makes sense.

Also, it makes me want to smoke, which I'll be doing right now xD

[dragontory]

Ahaha, thank you for this long comment ^^ I love long comments.

Chinese people don't always get sarcasm either! My Mum thinks I'm lying OTL. Sarcasm is like one of my favourite things so it can be frustrating! Did you go to Korea on holiday or an exchange programme or something?

I get what you mean! Where after all that's said an done, it's the same situation as the beginning.

Ahh, that's an unintended effect of this fic -.-' maknae reprimands you LOL. I don't know why I decided to write a few drabbles about smoking when I have no idea what it feels like.. gaah.. I'm glad this came off ok even though I have no first hand experience!

[41551947105]

Taking people too serious runs in asian blood, I think xD

I went because I switched studies, had a year of working in between and that gave me the opportunity. It was for 5 weeks, just looking around and diving into the culture, lived with a host family (theyweresoawesomeomg ;_;) Fell in love. Def. going back as an exchange student in a few years!

Apologies to maknae! (I feel my smoking habit is nearing it's end though, it's still a lingering attchement to a smoking ex, but the bittersweet associations are slowly fading enough to reveal the actual disgustingness of it xD ...this sounds like a drabble in itself, haha)

[dragontory]

Ahh, I was going to say, it sounds like you got to know them more than I would expect a tourist could :) I'm off to study in Hong Kong in September and I am really excited (I currently live in England hehe.)

That sounds like a brilliant drabble.. sounds sort of perfect GTOP, where Ji smokes because TOP smokes.. are you going to write this idea or would you /kill/ me if I stole it?