FIC: What's the point of being Popular (if you can't do what you want?), 3/??

[dramatictheory]

Title: What’s the Point of being Popular (if you can’t do what you want?) (2/??)
Pairing,Character(s): Sam/Puck (getting there)
Rating: PG-13 (this chapter)
Spoilers: Follows on from the end of Season Two, after the summer
Summary: The school year gets started and Sam is going quietly insane. Find Chapter 1 Here and Chapter 2 Over Here

a/n: Every piece

Comments

NICE

[asm613]

“Sam, I don’t care if you’re straight, gay, or like... transform into a Na’vi during the full moon.”
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the chap is ALL GREAT dialog- but the line above stood out for me. very nicely done.

i like how your au is blended with actual events in sam's life in regards to the parents out of work and living in motel, etc...

i really like your puck and your sam.. your dialogs bring them lots of personality and presence and feeling.

the bitch! i hope he calls child services on them_ if his mom wants to run away from sam's struggles; sam should add to her troubles. child abandonment-cause sam's a minor.

really interesting. thanks for sharing

i do wish there were some good stories where sam or puck don't have to get through something horrible before or during their hooking up. where are all the fluffy stories?

Re: NICE

[dramatictheory]

That's actually one of my favorite lines :D I'm really glad you like the dialog because that's what I've been trying to work on most for this fic :D