Comments | dramione_advent: December 14

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December 14

Dec 14, 2010 06:31

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mkhtl December 14 2010, 15:08:24 UTC

Nice interweaving of the magical world and our myths and legends - also it was fun to read a piece incorporating Draco's hair as the catalyst for a certain series of events - most often it's "Hermione's bushy mane" or some such variation! Love the ending with him nestling against her neck.

eevilalice December 14 2010, 15:21:38 UTC

Lol, Draco's hair is usually only dangerous as a lure to fangirls and to the characters he's shipped with, so I figured it could get him into trouble (but then "salvation"!) here. ;)

When I got the reindeer prompt I just had to do magical flying reindeer! :)

Mm, neck nestling... Thanks!

d_vivace December 14 2010, 17:34:18 UTC

This was fantastic! I enjoyed this very much!! Excellent job! :-)

eevilalice December 14 2010, 18:06:21 UTC

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! :D

pokeystar December 14 2010, 20:03:37 UTC

Freebert Nortluge

Best name evah.

I think Hermione has a new project. And I mean that in the best possible sense.

The pacing was awesome and exploiting Draco's bad luck with all things animal was an excellent call on your part.

Double Squee!

eevilalice December 14 2010, 21:35:25 UTC

I confess that I'm very proud of myself for coming up with that name; I giggle like an idiot each time I read/think of it, so...best comment evah! XD

Thank you so much for the squee! I appreciate it muchly. :D

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eevilalice December 15 2010, 00:05:14 UTC

Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! I, too, imagine Draco to be sexy in his swank winterwear, lol. ;)

What a compliment that I made you tear up! And I can absolutely picture them growing closer; when she says his name in her head like that, I envisioned her relearning who he is (or learning for the first time, or learning new!Draco), and I think Draco's trying to "revise" himself. She's definitely helped him along in that, and how can that not create intimacy (plus, snuggling, lol)?

Thanks so much, Soft!

uniquepov December 15 2010, 04:03:29 UTC

What a wonderful story! I loved the pacing, I loved Freebert Nortluge and his test drive, I loved the imagery of the snowglobe and just the whole setting. All the small details of their interactions once they got inside Hagrid's were perfect. Draco's hesitance, Hermione's no-nonsense practicality, Draco's thumbs sweeping the insides of her wrists, and their conversation...

So... yeah.... pretty much loved everything about it. =) Thank you so much for sharing with us!

eevilalice December 15 2010, 04:42:55 UTC

Thank you so much for the glowing review! :) It took me forever to get them into Hagrid's, but once I did I could have written that scene forever!