Valentine's Challenge Prompt 7: Unwanted Visitors

Feb 11, 2012 21:21

Title: Unwanted Visitors
Author: shy_of_reality
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 598
Notes/Warning: Prompt 7 (Cupid / Panties / Incarcerous)

Unwanted Visitors )

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a_frozen_second February 12 2012, 23:17:25 UTC
I really enjoyed this. The simplicity of your diction, coupled with the lack of dialogue, make it a great read. And of course the humor of the situation adds to it, too. Great drabble :)

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shy_of_reality February 13 2012, 01:12:07 UTC
Thanks :D

Actually, when I was writing it, I had a couple places where I started to put dialogue, but decided I didn't like it. So I'm glad you agree.

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