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Valentine's Challenge Prompt 7: Unwanted Visitors
Feb 11, 2012 21:21
Title: Unwanted Visitors
Author:
shy_of_reality
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 598
Notes/Warning: Prompt 7 (Cupid / Panties / Incarcerous)
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Unwanted Visitors
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a_frozen_second
February 12 2012, 23:17:25 UTC
I really enjoyed this. The simplicity of your diction, coupled with the lack of dialogue, make it a great read. And of course the humor of the situation adds to it, too. Great drabble :)
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shy_of_reality
February 13 2012, 01:12:07 UTC
Thanks :D
Actually, when I was writing it, I had a couple places where I started to put dialogue, but decided I didn't like it. So I'm glad you agree.
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Actually, when I was writing it, I had a couple places where I started to put dialogue, but decided I didn't like it. So I'm glad you agree.
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