Candy Cigarettes (4/4)

Jun 22, 2008 15:40

Title: Candy Cigarettes (4/4)
Pairing: Clark/Bruce
Rating: PG-13 (Though I want to say R)
Word count: 15218
Warnings: Drug use, violence, disturbing imagery, and innuendo (Bats and Clowns do not make nice housepets)

Summary: Superman visits Arkham, and finds the Joker behind bars.  He and the Joker have an unusual conversation about Batman.

A/N: This is ( Read more... )

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arch_schatten June 22 2008, 23:04:12 UTC
Awww maaaaaan!!! X) X) The ending, man, and I saw it in the last chapter, and I thought so, but with Joker.. I don't know, you never know. Their argument, and your Bruce, and your Clark's anger at the way Bruce resembles them, could be lost to them, and Bruce laughing!! eeeeee!!!

X) X)

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“Thanks to the Joker, I’m used goods. Oh, woe is me. Now Bruce shall call off our marriage, and shame me before Mama and the town.”

I love all your characters for being able to laugh at themselves. Clark cracked me up there, knowing he's blowing things out of proportion, and not fully knowing what is wrong with him.

"You know, you don't really laugh a lot,” Clark said.

“Nope. Not me.” Bruce was not in the mood to talk and had fallen into his default mode of utter compliance.I really liked this discussion! it makes sense in my head, that Bruce will just.. lie like a rug there, and agree with things and try to retreat, especially if he's angry too at Clark for not trusting that he's more of a man than a ( ... )

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draqonelle June 25 2008, 05:41:18 UTC
Awww maaaaaan!!! X) X) The ending, man, and I saw it in the last chapter, and I thought so, but with Joker.. I don't know, you never know. Their argument, and your Bruce, and your Clark's anger at the way Bruce resembles them, could be lost to them, and Bruce laughing!! eeeeee!!!X) X)
Okay... must.. compose.. decent comment...

NOOOOO More flaterry! I am a comment ho
I love all your characters for being able to laugh at themselves. Clark cracked me up there, knowing he's blowing things out of proportion, and not fully knowing what is wrong with him.Clark is just that to me. He is very self-un-aware. I sort of love characters like that. He struggles with negative and upsetting emotions and is never quite sure why he feels isolated, insecure and awkward, when he doesn't have these qualities. He doesn't realize that these are what make him human, not an ease of going through life. Intelligent, Brave, Compassionate, but no clue ( ... )

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godiloveslash June 23 2008, 01:40:17 UTC
This fic was heartbreakingly wonderful. Your Joker was spot on and you could almost feel how much he wanted to be normal and love Bruce. Your Bruce and Clark were awesome too, full of doubt and fear just the way I love them.

Welcome to World's Finest!

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draqonelle June 25 2008, 05:05:10 UTC
Ah thanks. Joker is hard to write because he wants to eat the story. Because he needs all the attention, because he is so very lonely... His pyschological character always forces your hand in terms of writing style.

He is never able to express his feelings for the Batman, because he can't deal with them. They aren't even bad, he just can't deal with them. I think that in some universes Joker and Batman would make a wonderful couple... Where in the hell is that Elseworlds!

I do prefer the awkward and intense passion and bond of Clark and Bruce though. They constantly frustrate and test each other, because being with them tests the boundaries of their self. They can't help but grow when they are loved and cultivated properly. I may be a cynic at heart but I don't think they could be happy forever. Their relationship is based on a tension of betterment.

Thank you for the welcome

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godiloveslash June 25 2008, 12:50:56 UTC
*smacks head* I almost forgot about that!

Here is part one(not all of it because it's scans daily!): http://community.livejournal.com/scans_daily/5610850.html#cutid1

Part two: http://community.livejournal.com/scans_daily/5624412.html#cutid1

And in my stress I mixed up this one with another one

Part one: http://community.livejournal.com/scans_daily/5599373.html#cutid1

Part Two: http://community.livejournal.com/scans_daily/5604085.html#cutid1

The second one has Bruce turning into the Joker in it, stress makes my brain go crazy.

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draqonelle June 26 2008, 23:35:19 UTC
Thank you lovely!

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hyperactivator June 23 2008, 13:00:49 UTC
Exellent story. Very well detailed and psycological.

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draqonelle June 25 2008, 05:08:58 UTC
Thank you for the compliments. Me and quiet__tiger worked very hard!
The dialogue jumped at me. The rest of it was pretty brutal. gotta watch those rogues... They love to eat stories!
Thank you for the review!

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tininess June 23 2008, 17:37:22 UTC
waaahaaa!!! This is goooooooood! Wonderful twist on Joker's obsession with the Bats and a refreshing Clark/Bruce interaction. Can't to read more of your Clark/Bruce stuff. xDD

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draqonelle June 25 2008, 05:11:50 UTC
yeah Joker and the Bats. Why is there so much Clex fic, and no Boker.... Jats..... Juice? Okay maybe it's the awkward name but still.

I wanted to something manly and mean and raw, between these two. Something that really helps them grow into more awesome people.... and that is hard when you are writing for such Icons so they had to be meaner.

Thank you for the review

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duluna June 27 2008, 01:23:34 UTC
:D

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