Here's a Story I've been toying with for a while

[drcropcircles]

London smells of murky rainwater and I smelt of beer.

My cheek was wet against my hand on the glass divider near the doors of the tube train. My other hand was hot, holding a stale cider can.

At whatever time it was on the tube -past midnight- there two types of people. People going somewhere and people who aren’t going anywhere. There was a girl

Comments

Cool!

[kcscribbler]

Interesting - your talent for description blows me out of the water, certainly; I could see and smell and hear everything there. Nice job!
~KCS

Re: Cool!

[drcropcircles]

Yay- you are so nice. I've been on here isolated like an island- now you are the only person commenting [except my cousin, but she only came on because she felt sorry for me]