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[dreambard]

Revive the Ashes

Daring eyes and untamed souls,

These things, I don't see anymore.

Dancing free and carelessly,

These things, Don't come easy anymore.

A fire held by someone who would light the starless night,

This thing, I don't see anymore.

Dim my light so you can shine,

The fire's all the dimmer for the lack of myne,

Can you remember how

Comments

[dreambard]

eeee! ^___^ thank you! I always love good reveiws when it comes to my writing

~Cc/Fawn

EDIT: actually, i only like reveiws in which people actually SAY something about my writing, which you did, I can't explain, but yah, thanx!!!!

[miss_polyglot]

It's beautiful and bittersweet and makes me feel a dozen things at once and also reminds me of how much I've missed you.