FMA [BigBang Fic]: ACIS: Central City (5/7)

[dreamer1789]

Title: ACIS: Central City
Genre: Divergence, Mystery, Family
Summary: Mangaverse, divergence. Central City 1910 - 1916. Political upheaval has restructured the proud nation of Amestris to a blooming democracy, where the art of alchemy is no longer glorified, but monitored for the distrust it has sown. In this obstructive climate, Roy Mustang’s

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[evil_little_dog]

I see a typo!

A gun discharged. Breaks screeched as the train lurched on its tracks. Someone had finally alerted the machinist.

"Brakes" for "Breaks"

And "Machinist" probably should be "Engineer". XD

I really, really love that Roy's team has been under investigation the entire time - and didn't know it. At least, that's the implication I got.

[dreamer1789]

Ah, thanks for spotting the typos - I'm fixing them. ^^

Well, Roy insists he suspected that Olivia wouldn't trust him too much. Whether he's just bluffing or not... ;)

[evil_little_dog]

I'm sure Roy suspected Olivier didn't trust him - but did he think he was being investigated? XD

[dreamer1789]

Hmm, you'd have to ask him, I'm afraid.

But Olivia did admit at their first chat to having done some digging, ex. the whole Hawkeye thing. With Armstrong's whole 'friends, enemies and close' theme going on, team Roy (or at least Roy & Riza, with their knowledge of many black ops) should have considered the possibility, at least. Whether they gave it any credit or just thought they might be getting paranoid... Well, I'll leave that up to your preference.

[seta_suzume]

Even the gold-toothed doctor gets a part! :D

I can't get over the idea of Kimblee having trained Winry- that image pleases me way too much! XD;

[dreamer1789]

Actually, I tried very hard to avoid using the Gold-Toothed Doctor (as he's a bit of an easy bad guy, imo.) But the old bugger kept insisting how just Tucker would never full such feats off on his own, plus Tucker is too spineless to succesfully force Marcoh to cooperate with anything and I didn't want to make an OC (I suck at OC's: way too 2D), so the good Doctor got drafted. And since this Doctor does have canon connections to the bigwigs, well... ^^;