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dreamer__m

Alternate update

Nov 20, 2004 22:51

Comments 31

vedaprophet November 21 2004, 07:28:32 UTC

I almost don't want to comment. I know how delicate muses can be, though Muse seems to have a strong constitution. ;-)

[whispering]Can I just say I'm so glad you are still posting it in your lj, even if you want to re-touch it later and I still think it's great?[/whispering]

dreamer__m November 21 2004, 08:49:05 UTC

Hee thanks muchly. It really does help me to see my fic not on Word--I get extra-sensitive to inconsistencies and errors.

Muse: What she means is she has this stupid idea of using reviews/feedback/whatever as pseudo-beta work.

thistle90 November 21 2004, 17:49:02 UTC

Welcome to LJ ( ... )

dreamer__m November 21 2004, 18:37:17 UTC

Thanks for the warm reception!

You stalked my lj? Wow, that's too cool. :) I don't mind people seeing these before I cross-post--the biggest reason why I don't is that I don't want to clutter big communities with small updates.

Thanks for the suggestions, I really do appreciate them. And for some reason I completely forgot about Justin's hand! Sheesh. I'll definitely do something about that before this leaves my lj. ;) And my Gale isn't gay. Touching and casual kisses don't seem to be a big deal with them, from what I've seen from behin-the-scenes stuff.

Oh, I'll friend you too! And thanks for the beta offer, don't be surprised if I do take you up on that sometime later. ;P

severina2001 November 23 2004, 06:26:02 UTC

Came here via qafhappy and just wanted to say that I absolutely love this take on Gale and Randy. Must sleep now, but I'm anxiously awaiting more. :)

dreamer__m November 23 2004, 14:24:16 UTC

O_O

Guh. I mean, thanks! Yikes, I've like, read all your stuff and loved them and now you're--um, wow. This is just really cool. Okay, I'll stop now.

zosha2003 November 23 2004, 07:31:03 UTC

I, too, have shamelessly stalked your journal in the hope of finding more of this. I wish I could say I felt shame, but there's only excitement here ... woo hoo I found another chapter!

dreamer__m November 23 2004, 14:36:57 UTC

I really am loving that I have stalkers. :)

Hm, I should probably have links to previous chapters in my next update. I never really thought to do that, since I didn't think a lot of people were reading this on my lj... Lol, I guess I don't want people having to dig through all my neurotic ramblings to find fic updates.

teisfortiger November 23 2004, 17:48:52 UTC

When Gale realized he only had one ball, the first thing thru my mind was 'Oh poor guy, and I wonder what horrible things the writers have in mind for him in the fifth season.' Yet moments later, I was totally LMAO when I read this "I'm going to mourn the loss of my ball now, hope you don’t mind."

I liked how you gave each actor the physical characteristic of their characters(does that mean that Gale is probably a lot more hung than he used to be?), but was it necessary to take the RESIST tattoo away? Unlike Randy's, they've never tried to hide it on the show, and we've seen it fairly clearly a few times. Plus from what Michael said in an early S1 episode, Brian has a tattoo. Of course, he also said that in was in a spot we'd never see. o_O

dreamer__m November 23 2004, 18:37:32 UTC

Well, Randy's tattoo was visible several times as well (although makeup did try to hide it)... I took their tattoos out because the writers treated them like they didn't exist. I have the idea of these bodies being how Brian and Justin really are if they did exist for themselves.

Hm, don't think that made much sense. -_-

dreamer__m November 23 2004, 22:10:56 UTC

does that mean that Gale is probably a lot more hung than he used to be?

Umm... O_o