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[dreamer_way]

Just a couple drabbles to break a mean writer's block I been having

Title: Pressure
Author: Dreamer Way
Rated: T
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters.
Warnings: Implied drug use
Summary: First Aid seeks any kind of help to make sure he stays prefect.

As the doors to his office opened, First Aid entered inside and headed over to his desk. The

Comments

[okami_hu]

he had an image to up hold too --> to hold up
Unlocking the bottom drawer, Aid lifted up a locked box --> word repetition
His brothers would killed him --> shouldn't it be 'would have'...?
if someone founded out --> 'found', as you have previously written

[dreamer_way]

heh, I'll get right to those ^^; Thanks, hoped that you actually enjoyed reading them

[arahsi]

Oooh, I *loved* the one with First Aid!

Are you going to expand on it? Pretty please?