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[dreamer_way]

 Hi! I have been a long time lucker around here and just love everything I view around her. Finally had the nerve to join up here...sooooo, here is the first.

Title: Drive by
Author: Dreamer Way
Rated: PG
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters.
Warnings: None
Prompt: Hound / Wildrider / penance
Summary: All Hound wanted was a day off.

Really don't have

Comments

Nice job

[voughn]

Nice job on yr first fic. :)

I've just joined LJ and started meeting all these wonderful people who LOVE TF!! WOOT!

I'd forgotten most of my TFs and had TOTALLY forgotten about the Stunticons.

Your writing style is nice and clean, with only a few redundancies in wording. But I do that all the time and my beta picks it up. hehe.

The only thing I didn't like was the sad ending. :)

PS. I was wondering why you had that disclaimer before we could read yr fic? I've read a lot more violent that don't have it. Anyway, I'm new here so maybe I'm asking a stupid question.

Re: Nice job

[dreamer_way]

Thank you very much. I'll try to remember that when I am working on the next piece. I am glad that you enjoy it as well.

As for the discaimer, I was just being careful with the sight of the all the humans being injured and the mention of blood. I wasn't sure on how the rating system totally worked around here. ^^;

Re: Nice job

[eerian_sadow]

there isn't so much of a system around here as reader discretion. you were right to include the warning about blood, but it wouldn't have been a big deal if you didn't. some of us have written things with much more blood and violence and forgotten the warning entirely.

Re: Nice job

[dreamer_way]

Ok, I'll remember next time. I just wanted to be careful as this was my first time posting something around here. Didn't want to step on any toes or such things.

[eerian_sadow]

this is incredibly sad, but its a lovely fic. i did notice a few grammatical errors as i read, but there was nothing massive. probably things that you would have caught yourself if you went back and read it out loud. (that method of self-editing catches a large number of mistakes)

don't be nervous about any future offerings you might make to transformers community; you are a sold writer with talent.

[dreamer_way]

Thanks! Sorry about the sad ending, but it what the generator gave me. But still, glad you enjoy it.

As well, thanks for the advice. I'll try that next time for the next story...maybe