[GBtR] Chapter 9

[dreaming_col]

Title: Getting Back to Real
Chapter Title: (10/?) Into Place
Pairings: YooMin, HoSuJae
Rating: PG-13 for now
Genre: AU, sci-fi, drama
Summary: After the events in Dreaming Back to This, the five have fled Korea and started to rebuild a new life for themselves far away. The past still haunts them, however, perhaps even more than they first realized

Comments

[feyla]

Jaejoong is still my favorite. Slipper to the face. XDD I loved it.

It was weird seeing them so calm about it though. Just, oh let him go and do it. I mean, I'm all for him growing up, but they were so calm about it. Besides Jaejoong. And then Changmin goes on a break or something and just starts killing people. Which is why it was good you had that background info in there. But it still seemed sudden. And really, I just need to go back and read everything over again. It's been so long that I"m losing all my details....

[dreaming_col]

^_^ Tried to inject a little bit of humor back into this angst-fest. Some people didn't seem to think so, but whatever. I think Jae's little temper tantrums are hilarious. XD

[feyla]

No I did not. I'll go back and look though.

I loved the slipper throwing. I approve of it. And Jaejoong. XDD

Yeah, Yoochun is definitely in shock. I couldn't decide about the reactions I think just because it's been so long. You know how it is when you read something and then you come back for those sporadic updates much later and it's just not the same frame of mind. Although, you have definitely been better about the updates lately. :D

[dreaming_col]

You always approve of Jaejoong. I think he'd have to kill a kitten or something to gain your displeasure... XD

It really has been a while. DBtT took me soooo long, but my coffee dates with myself have really helped me stay on track with this one. Well, that and I can already kind of see the end coming and I want to finish it up so I can start on Su-demon. XDDDDD

[emda]

I got so many things in my mind that I dont know what to comment but here I go.

Im glad Yoochun & Jaejoong will get trained, they need to kick ass and soon! And Im glad Changmin left a back-up plan to protect the others.

What irks/worries me is that with everything that Changmin has to go through to destroy the Center will end with him losing his sanity. I just cant imagine someone killing so much, planning, calculating so much so young and walking out of it fairly unscratch. I dont think sharing dreams with Yoochun will help that much. It seems too much of horrible things but I do hope he wont lost it as much.

This chapter really wanted to get written!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

[dreaming_col]

I'm definitely hoping the training will get them kicking ass soon. As long as Chunnie cooperates. Though with his history with me in this fic so far, that's a total coin toss. :/

Min definitely won't remain completely unaffected, but I think we have to be careful about trying to pigeon-hole him into a certain kind of reaction. As HoSu pointed out, Min was raised to be anything but normal, so he's going to process and deal with these things a lot different than a regular person would.

It did~! Just kept whispering in my ear, even at work. "Go write~~~" Was quite easy. Wish they all went like that... XD

[gompi]

badass min? :DDDDD i'm really glad he's getting in touch with his feelings even though he's gone now D:

-sputters nonsense and runs away-

[dreaming_col]

Gotta love fierce!Min. He's finally sick of it all, and he's gonna make sure they know it. XD

[crimson_miharu]

Totally ignored Jaejoong and his bitch fit this chapter. I get he is very protective of Min because of what they have both been through but come on it's Chun! CHun would NEVER force Min to do something or hurt him in anyway. I think this is the perfect time for Jae to focus on himself with Min currently M.I.A and fight his own demons. So happy the action is about to pick up and dang Min has totally gone gangsta lol. Killing people..I expected him to fight but somehow I didn't anticipate that eh would REALLy take a persons life so quickly...thought he would save the murder for Phillips but I'm proud of him for being proactive and taking the fight to them instead of waiting for shit to happen. He's forcing the Centre's hand and causing them to scramble because no one thought that Min; the prey; would be the one making the first move... At the same time though I'm concerned for Min's state of mind. He's forcing himself to do what he has to do to protect his family but at what cost...

[dreaming_col]

Jae understands that, really. But, at the same time, he would have freaked out no matter who it was with Min, mostly for the exact reason Su states - that Jae latches onto the child side of Min that needs protection. But all of Jae's issues will definitely be explored in future chaps, so it'll be explained more thoroughly.

Min... I think we have to be very careful (even me while I'm writing it) not to attempt to make Min's mentality fit into what we consider normal. He's close - probably closer than he should be considering all he's been through - but he can by no means be judged by how we or even one of the other boys would react in the same situation. Won't save much because, again, this will all be explained more, but I will point out that Min's not forcing himself to do anything. Is he feeling some guilt over it? Yes, absolutely. It'd be a completely different story if he weren't even capable of that. But he's not struggling at all with his decision to do this.

[rennie_88]

hehehehehe omgod loved the jaechun moment XDDDD joongie flipping out about naked chun lmao! that was a nice little lighthearted scene that reminded me of how they were at the very beginning of the fic ~ and then the little yoosu moment was so ...:) all the eyerolling over mama-jae XDDDD

[dreaming_col]

That's what I was going for~~~! A little bit of a return to what they were before, that even with how far they've come since then - both in distance and life experience - Jae is still a bit of a drama queen with a no-holds-barred approach to his best friend. ^^

Yeah, I'm excited to see where their powers go, too. Absolutely no clue right now. XD And Jaejoong won't have the distraction anymore, but that's probably better for him. Maybe he can finally stop focusing on Min and face his own demons. ^^ And of course HoSu will be there with him every step of the way. ♥

I don't know how many others will be joining directly, or at least how much I'll mention. Min will definitely be doing the heavy-lifting, though, figuratively speaking. As far as a descriptive attack in return for that torture in the first part, Min will get his time. I'm already thinking his confrontation with Phillips will be a full chap all by itself, so I'm sure there will be plenty of description there for you. It'll get messy, that's for sure. *evil laugh*

[rennie_88]

yeah cuz ppl can still find normalcy even amongst the hardest messed up times. and they have eachother thru it all ^^ happy for all the love between them all~~
omona~ im already getting excited imagining how that chapter could goo~ nothing to hold min back from exploding crazy on phillips after all the harm he did min andhis family TT gogoo

[dreaming_col]

Exactly~~~ I'm sure Chun was expecting it from Jae anyway. Add in the fact that Min had left so Jae was feeling extra-emotional... Chun knew what was coming. XD
Though you have to remember, Phillips does have that negation power, so Min will have to get... creative. ^_~