Inner Beauty 5/?

[dreaming_k]

Title: Inner Beauty - Part 5
Author: Dreaming K
Category: Slash eventually (Jim/Blair)
Rating: PG
Words: 1981
Disclaimer: I don't own The Sentinel or any of the characters of the show. Just dreaming :)

Written for the challenge #193 'monster' at sentinel_thurs . Just a bit late for the challenge, but who cares. Not betaed. Is anybody out there interested in

Comments

[mrs_sweetpeach]

You've made my day, posting another part of this fic. I've missed the story and reading this part only solidified my opinion that you're a great storyteller. I can only hope you post the next part soon.

[dreaming_k]

I appologize for making you wait so long for this part. I'm glad that you still like the story. :)

[laurie_ky]

There's a fairy tale feel to this story. I'm getting curious to know what the heck Blair did to end up in his spirit animal form.

You asked for a look-see. I'm not very good at doing the beta things but I did see these:
Even more so as none of Aquino’s healers can find anything wrong with me, [safe] for my heightened senses {save}

There [where] whispers everywhere about how their prince had brought the stray wolf into their castle. {were}
Laurie

[dreaming_k]

I really appreaciate your pointing out those mistakes, they've been corrected.
I love fairy tales, so of course I'd try my hand at writing one. ;) How is James going to turn Blair into a human again, is what I wonder. lol.
Thanks for your comment!

[dreaming_k]

*looks sheepish*
I forgot your cookies for spotting the mistakes. *hands over cookies*
Thanks again!

[laurie_ky]

::skips breakfast and goes for the cookies::
although I hardly think I earned them.
But thank you,
Laurie

[aerianya]

Yea! More soon I hope...

[dreaming_k]

Heh. Thanks. :)
Love the icon!

[aerianya]

*um yeah, I hit the wrong one, but I guess werewolf sorts fits huh?

[annieb1955]

I'd be glad to beta for you. My email is

annie.booker@gmail.com.

My fics are at

http://brothersinarms.tvheaven.com

Interesting story this. Looking forward to more.

[dreaming_k]

I'm glad you like it. Thanks!
And thank you for offering to beta. I sent you an email.

[snycock]

Ah, good, a new chapter! I love fairy tales, and you've done a great job making Blair's personality come through here even though he's a wolf. Looking forward to more...

[dreaming_k]

Thank you. :)
I love fairy tales as well, and Jim and Blair are just perfect for them, which is probably due to the whole spiritual side of the show.