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Sep 16, 2004 20:06

Thank-you Linds and Sara! :D

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whoops! goneplatinum September 17 2004, 00:42:28 UTC

We were in our big blue van, who we had always appropriately called "Big Blue".

Since a car is not alive, it would have to read "which".

Other than that, looks good hon.

Re: whoops! goneplatinum September 17 2004, 00:43:26 UTC

"Which" instead of "who".

Sorry, my mind is elsewhere.

Re: whoops! dreamingofmore September 17 2004, 00:47:06 UTC

Oh! I caught that on the rough draft and I forgot to change it on the final! Thanks for catching that.

winzipinzi September 17 2004, 15:30:35 UTC

thanks for looking over my paper!!! I hope I did okay on it. It was worth a quiz grade. EeK!!!!!

dreamingofmore September 18 2004, 17:35:38 UTC

You probably did great! The part where you added that you wanted to slap her made me laugh. I think the professor will laugh, too! You'll do great!