The Dangerous Edge of Things aka Sherlock Holmes has a Boyfriend who lives in Canada Part 1

[dreamingrain]

Basd n This Prompt and written with all the love my Maple Leaf Heart can supply.

Comments

[ellie_hell]

Well, I had to read it again! It's just as good, if not better since I wasn't reading in a frenzy of "OMG there's a new part!!!".

Harry's text messages really crack me up. Of course the Leafs are playing the Canadien and haha, that Shirlok guy. The Tim Horton's reference is still a delight, I thought about this fic every time I had a cup since I first read that part (made me smile like an idiot, it wasn't suspicious at all).

The part with the process of elimination that led him to choose Ontario was beautiful, their first phone call was adorable, John's arrival at the airport was very tender with just the right amount of sweet awkwardness and maple syrup is delicious.

I am officially stalking you and waiting for more.

[dreamingrain]

Haha well welcome to the stalker-dom! I hope that your next coffee contains something other than please play again.
And Oh God, Maple Syrup. I sometimes forget how good it is, content to go for caramel or some other sweet...and then I get some Maple Fudge or something and then I remember why we produce so much of it.

[etothepii]

I'm super enjoying this fic. <33333333 Canadian!John. Scotland Yard's reaction is hilarious. :3 :3 :3

PS: Double-spacing your paragraphs would make them a lot easier to read, especially the dialoguey bits. It's a really simple change, and improves readability by a lot.

[dreamingrain]

Thank you for reading!

Also, Good call on the double-spacing! Is there a secret HTML tag or do I just do it manually?

[etothepii]

Unfortunately, you'll have to do it manually. I'm in the habit already of hitting enter twice between paragraphs when I type stuff up, especially since I write my fics in word docs and leave the docs single-spaced (so they're noticeably hard to read if I miss one).

[dreamingrain]

Holy cow LJ formatting is a pain. Thanks for the advice, though - I'd hate to give people migraines while they good-naturedly suss through my story.

[ningen_demonai]

Eeeeee~! *Claps hands and waits in glee*

[dreamingrain]

*spins you* Thanks for reading!

[dreamingrain]

haha well thank you, I hope your opinion improves on the second run!

[beansidhe_baby]

Eee, I'm enjoying this so much!

[dreamingrain]

Thank you for continuing to read! Although I must say...i think I broke the rule of Fandom as your icon details.