Nejiten ficlet entry for Ten_squared's theme of the month: Unlike a river, but similar to a marsh.
I'm still not used to writing fluff, and I've realized that whenever I try to it all reads pretty much the same, like, I always somehow manage to end with smut but oh well. This was fun. XD
Theme of the month: Unlike a river, but similar to a marsh.
Chocolate
“Hn. Tell me why you have to do this again?”
Tenten rolled her eyes. “Stop it, Neji. ( Read more... )
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You WIN... Because I SAY SO DANMIT! :3 Truly... this was very, very well written!
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My face hurts from the non-stop GRINNING that overtook me when I read this. I still can't stop! Everything Neji does is adorable, from his fascination with chocolate to his sulking when Tenten ignores him for the cake to his horror at Gai's wedding. (Speaking of, I wonder how Kiba is taking it)
*pinches Neji's cheeks* You're so cute, yes you are!
And when he goes all sheepish from ruining Tenten's work....awwww. Speaking of, I love the angle you took regarding Tenten's cooking skills. It would make sense for her to be an expert carver, too.
favorite lines, out of many: "(though that could have stemmed from the fact that Tenten was doing it. Neji always found Tenten inexplicably fascinating)."
"“No. It needs more chocolate.” Neji shook his head decisively. “..........Chocolate is good.”
And I bet he really thinks so by the end of the fic. That was hott. :D
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You are squished, and you are loved.
That was fantastic fluff. In-character, silly, and yet plotful, and zOMG, hilarious.
“Hyuugas don’t whine.” Neji informed her pointedly.
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I repeat, you are squished and you are loved.
Great work! <3 <3 <3
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really cute story! ^^ (it was soooo sweet when he started whining... and the: is it done yet - from neji reminds me of the donkey in shrek 2 *grin*)
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