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[dreamsofbluesky]

Something had been bothering me about Tenten for quite a while now, and this ficlet came from me trying to work out how I see her character.  My interpretation might be different from other people's but thats ok =] please review anyway! Constructive criticism would be very much appreciated.

I've planned this in two parts - Part 1: Departure and

Comments

[himehikari]

beautiful! simply beautiful! but a bit sad too ~

um..can I ask something...does Tenten really goes off training with Anko? Coz I've read a few fics on that, so yeah..I'm slow ^^;

NejiTen is love!

[dreamsofbluesky]

0.o There are other fics where she goes off to train with Anko? Really? Coolios. No, it doesnt actually happen in the manga or anime. I just picked Anko because....who else? Besides, I kinda like the idea of Anko rubbing off on Tenten~
Thnx!

[angstyalex]

-sobsob-

GOD, I'm such a sucker on christmas. x_x

[dreamsofbluesky]

....Merry Christmas. ^___^"

actually, it wasnt supposed to be that sad...

[angstyalex]

Lol. I wonder what your writing looks like when its MEANT to be sad. >_>

You know what? You should write another one of these, that deals with Tenten's return, and how she'd have come to her senses, only to have had Neji move on. If you wanted to kill me dead with anst, of course. XD

[dreamsofbluesky]

o.0
*take notes in Teh Notebook*

Eh, it's not meant to be that sad because...er...because I said there was gonna be a part 2: return. ^_^"

But now that you've mentioned it, I might as well make myself cry and write full-out angst. *already tearing up at prospect*

[tao_empress]

perfectly written! I always saw Tenten as a girl who wouldn't let anything get in the way of her dream [and that includes love]. don't kill me when I say this, but I expect [and possibly anticipate] Tenten to do something like this. me love muchly!!! can't wait to read the second part.

[dreamsofbluesky]

kyaaa! ^_^ I'm so glad you understood my point. That was the problem I had been mulling over for ages - Tenten is an ambitious girl...but she's keeping in Neji's shadow. Something had to give, neh?
Hope I wont disappoint with part 2 >_> Thnx for the kind review. =]

[tao_empress]

I figure, if the guys can be so ambitious about becoming strong and great [and maybe a little power hungry], why can't the girls [if they really wanted to]. after all, Sasuke gave up everything in his pursuit for more power. why can't Tenten give up everything to pursue her dream [in a less "I betrayed my village" sort of way]. makes sense, ne?
PS. I'm sure you'll do great with part 2. and you are very much welcomed to my review. ^-^ [am I the only one who noticed that rhymed?]