PERSONALITY REVISION dreamsonaplaneNovember 10 2010, 01:32:09 UTC
Robert is a man that wishes to make his father happy. Of course, their relationship has always been strained. His father owned the world in his fingertips and yet he could never give a moment to his son. When his son did manage to get his attention, he was always very disappointed. Needless to say, Robert has grown up his entire life people telling him what he can or cannot do, where he can or can't go and that is by people whom his father hired. His father issues are so deep that the extractors are able to use this to manipulate Robert into conceiving an idea. For instance, his desire to be noticed or to be acknowledged by his father is accented by the whole theme of the paper pinwheel. Robert places a picture of him and his father by his bedside table; obviously a cherished memory because in the picture, it shows Maurice actually sparing a smile and a moment with his son. He wants his father to see it and acknowledge that Robert loves him, but he doesn't. It's a fact that Robert takes bitterly to heart
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SAMPLE REVISIONS dreamsonaplaneNovember 10 2010, 01:52:35 UTC
The woman sitting across from Robert just doesn't understand that Robert could really care less about her. Of course there's that fake, tight smile, but really he just wants her to go away. She had stopped talking for a few minutes, staring at him as if he had to respond. He didn't care, she was too vapid for him to care and she hadn't gotten to the point of her inane story fast enough for him
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