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[dreamsreflected]

Pupa (Adolescence

Comments

[watching_ships]

You perfectly captured what a forging experience adolescence is. Beautiful.

[leni_ba]

Oh! This is good. I like that you started each stanza with a question, it does reflect will the uncertainty of those years. *thumbs up*

[rayaso]

I loved the structure of your poem, and the phrase "Wet winged emergence, chrysalis cracked." Very well done!

[eternal_ot]

Ah! Beautifully described those years of uncertainty...Loved this. Good Job!

[halfshellvenus]

Sharp tongues cut deep grooves.
It's so true, even though we try to pretend that words don't hurt us. They do, sometimes lastingly.

This WAS a nice depiction of adolescence, with so much change and uncertainty and slow transformation toward the dangerous and mysterious world of adulthood.