This is phenomenal. I love your word choices and the way your sentences flow and really dig the rise and fall to it in its entirety, which mirror the conflict of excitement vs stagnation.
This is Fantastic! Superbly crafted, each word makes you pause , take the meaning in and then move on or maybe come back read again. Well written indeed. Kudos! *Applause*
Ooh so well done! Awesome metaphor. Amazing last line, too. And I love the unexpectedness of "there are passengers and there are drivers," leading to "I'm a passenger." That made me laugh. Also, I remember those commercials, so you instantly made me think of watching them in my home as a child! Anyway, I really enjoyed this!
I liked this very much-- the concept, the phrasing. Being a passenger by choice is unusual, but if it's more the worry and risk of setting the direction, I think a lot of people might feel similarly.
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