LJ idol season 10 episode 1: I need the struggle to feel alive

Nov 22, 2016 12:07


LJ Idol Season 10: episode 1 I need the struggle to feel alive

When we talk about character, we almost never admit to being the non-player characters or the side kick of the world.
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lj idol, personal history, character, navel gazing

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marlawentmad November 25 2016, 19:59:15 UTC
I relate to this so much; as an anxiety sufferer, I often struggle with stagnation. There are so many beautiful lines here. Brava!

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yuniebaby November 25 2016, 23:25:17 UTC
This is phenomenal. I love your word choices and the way your sentences flow and really dig the rise and fall to it in its entirety, which mirror the conflict of excitement vs stagnation.

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eternal_ot November 26 2016, 14:45:03 UTC
This is Fantastic! Superbly crafted, each word makes you pause , take the meaning in and then move on or maybe come back read again. Well written indeed. Kudos! *Applause*

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ellison November 27 2016, 00:51:56 UTC
Ooh so well done! Awesome metaphor. Amazing last line, too. And I love the unexpectedness of "there are passengers and there are drivers," leading to "I'm a passenger." That made me laugh. Also, I remember those commercials, so you instantly made me think of watching them in my home as a child! Anyway, I really enjoyed this!

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halfshellvenus November 27 2016, 08:43:34 UTC
I liked this very much-- the concept, the phrasing. Being a passenger by choice is unusual, but if it's more the worry and risk of setting the direction, I think a lot of people might feel similarly.

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