Comments | dreamsreflected: LJ idol season 10 episode 5: Fear is the heart of love

dreamsreflected

LJ idol season 10 episode 5: Fear is the heart of love

Jan 15, 2017 16:39

The Ritual of first night ( Read more... )

words on a plate, lj idol, poetry, fiction

Comments 10

adoptedwriter January 18 2017, 02:03:18 UTC

This says a lot in a few words. Nice!

bleodswean January 18 2017, 15:54:47 UTC

Such a visual analogy!

my_name_is_jenn January 18 2017, 19:17:26 UTC

Beautiful!

halfshellvenus January 18 2017, 20:04:28 UTC

Fascinating imagery here, particularly the first stanza. The bridge itself is not that sturdy (in actuality or in what it represents), and yet it is the only thread of connection left.

dee_aar2 January 18 2017, 23:13:48 UTC

The imagery .... loved it. Dark in an embracing sort of way.