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dreamthenextday

{ chaptered } Tell Me Goodbye ★ 3

May 19, 2010 15:32

Title: Tell Me Goodbye [3/7]
Fandom: Big Bang
Genre: Angst, smutfic
Pairing: GRi
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Saw the rating? I kind of mean it.
Summary: Seungri has to get out.
N/A: OH HEY THIRD CHAPTER.

( Seungri had to get out. )

rating: nc-17, artist: big bang, genre: angst, length: chaptered, pairing: g-dragon/seungri

Comments 4

kwonjiyongvips May 19 2010, 21:34:49 UTC

I always laugh @ the N/A: OH HEY THIRD CHAPTER XD

During his whole existence, Seungri always heard that his heart is the one single thing he could always trust. For a very long time, he did believe in this and listened to every caprice his heart could have... but with time he also noticed that his heart was the most ravenous traitor he could ever have in his life. Maybe his heart had some sort of deficiency because it did something that it should not do and should not even be able to do.

Seungri fell in love with Jiyong.
-- GOR-GEOUS. BEST PART.

taking his Heartbreaker CD booklet and touch himself as thoughts of the object of his desires fogged his mind.
That's what VIPS do LOL ^^^^^^^^^^^^

It hurt because this was all it was and all it would ever be: fucking. Physically, it felt amazing but in Seungri's heart... it was just not good enough anymore.
Awww.. poor seungri, I hope Ji Yong will start lurving him too.. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

dreamthenextday May 20 2010, 02:27:06 UTC

ROFL, I had nothing to write in the N/A. XD

I'm glad you enjoyed that part. When I wrote it, I was all "Does it even make sense to anyone else?"

LOOOOL gurl, you nasty. Keep your CD jacket and your hands where they can be seen

peligr0 May 20 2010, 10:10:11 UTC

mind blowing sex right there. so good. but i feel for ri... jiyong, you should love him too DD:

papersanguine May 22 2010, 03:17:52 UTC

but with time he also noticed that his heart was the most ravenous traitor he could ever have in his life. That line flows in such a cool way. The word choice is beautiful! Comparing his heart to this ravenous beast only hungry for something it should not want is such a cool discription.

How did the ferocious hunger for Jiyong's body dissolve into the need to be in his arms? I love the power he feels. It's not this niggling little feeling, but this absolute needdesirewant for Jiyong.

Damn you're killing me with this fic!