{ chaptered } Tell Me Goodbye ★ Final

May 19, 2010 15:37

Title: Tell Me Goodbye [7/7]
Fandom: Big Bang
Genre: Angst, smutfic
Pairing: GRi
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Innuendos, maybe.
Summary: Her name was Yoomi.
N/A: OH HEY FINAL CHAPTER.

He did not need to question it anymore. )

artist: big bang, rating: pg-13, genre: angst, length: chaptered, artist: 2ne1, pairing: g-dragon/seungri, pairing: ?/oc

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dreamthenextday May 20 2010, 02:34:20 UTC
FUCK. I NEED AN ICON LIKE YOURS. Reminds me that in the original end of my fic, I was going to kill Seungri off but I decided against it after I watched the MV. YES, SHOCK. THIS FIC HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE ACTUAL SONG, I WROTE IT BEFORE WATCHING SHIT AND THEN I NEEDED A TITLE AND BAM YG RELEASES THIS SHIT. /bigger creep

SMUT IS THE CHERRY ON THE CAKE. :D

I wanted this to end right. I did not know how but I thought this was suitable and realistic instead of Ji being all "OMG I LUV U"/comforts

Oh my shuppa grrl. ♥ I'm glad to be back too. _o_

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hiroyukishinji May 19 2010, 20:36:44 UTC
...I DONT KNOW WHAT TO FEEL RIGHT NOW!!!!!! Should I be happy, sad, flailing, or doing what im doing now which is sitting here and staring at my laptop attempting to comment.

God do I want to be happy because he finally freaking admits it in the end? Do I want to be sad now because I have a feeling that Ji wont end up leaving the girl so they have a front to act behind. Im of course flailing from all the sex, angry and not. But I just.....DAMN YOU FOR MESSING WITH MY HEAD!!!!! (in a good way of course)

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dreamthenextday May 20 2010, 02:36:03 UTC
Feel... happy? I guess? Since you ended up writing a comment. :P

ROFLMAO I'M SORRY. I just liked having this sort of open-ended endings because it lets you guys imagine what happens next. Only I know how I want it to be but you can think something up too. <3

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stupidefleurk May 19 2010, 20:36:59 UTC
Ma bouche est tellement sèche ,sérieusement LMAO !
Je suis....hum...je n'arrive pas à m'exprimer correctement pour l'instant.Mon cœur battait à cent à l'heure .Toute la fanfiction est tellement brillante,je crois que je n'ai jamais été au bord des larmes en lisant une fanfiction mais là o_o Tu m'as démoli lol Intense,je crois que c'est le mot pour décrire l'histoire.J'avais la tête collait contre l'écran.
Mon dieu Seungri,j'ai toujours cette instinct de vouloir le protéger et là,j'étais prête à tuer yoomi pour lui ;_;
3So, she made it. That was just another reason to not eat this..."
Je n'ai pas pu m'empecher de rire comme une taré lol good one my panda è_é
Jiyong m'a vraiment torturé,mais la fin est géniale,je pense que c'est la meilleure fin possible.

J'espère que maintenant on te reverra plus souvent :3

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dreamthenextday May 20 2010, 02:41:21 UTC
Merci, chérie ♥

Espérons que ton coeur ne lache pas. Je voulais poster tout ca plus tôt mais je n'avait pas de titre et pouf, YG m'envoie le vidéo brillant et la chanson qui colle assez à ma fic et je te jure, j'ai sauté au plafond et j'ai pris le titre de la chanson. Les similarités sont une coincidence maladroite. XD C'est trop marrant.

Ne tue pas Yoomi, elle est basée sur un peu de moi et un peu de ma beta. XD

J'éspère que le syndrome de la page blanche ne me frappera pas encore!

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ayaisdifferent May 19 2010, 22:35:46 UTC
T-T I love this story...
brokenSeungRi is breaking my heart, I cried like a baby xD
*add to memories*

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dreamthenextday May 20 2010, 02:41:55 UTC
Aww /hugs

I'm glad you enjoyed, though? <3

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kwonjiyongvips May 19 2010, 22:37:10 UTC
Seungri did not ever notice the rings that ornamented her left ring finger and Jiyong's
~ That reminds me of what VIPS always bring back, that Ji wears this mysterious ring nobody knows about.. but they say youngbae had one too.. soo... GDYB SHIPPER HERE < XD Sorry, Ri!

Didn't you just say that you're bad with promises?"
Hahaha xD

Thanks for this fanfic, it was nice to read, but now, I'm tired like shit because I stayed up late only to read this - be happy - XD
aww ~ this was just too sweet..
But I wish it ended with Ji murdering the girl :D

Okay i'll stop.

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LOL YOU REPLIED TO EACH PART dreamthenextday May 20 2010, 02:44:06 UTC
ROFL I needed to use the ring in the fic somehow so I decided Yoomi should have the matching one. :P

I originally wanted to kill Seungri off in the end. Not Yoomi because I wanted it to stay realistic and because Yoomi is based on me and my beta (who never betas shit, but whatever XD)

lol, ilu. <3

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Re: LOL YOU REPLIED TO EACH PART kwonjiyongvips May 20 2010, 12:23:18 UTC
How is your 'Pain' fic doin' :D ~

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