{ 2/3 } Pain

[dreamthenextday]

Title: Pain [2/3]
Fandom: Big Bang
Pairing: GRi, GTOP
Genre: AU, Slash
Rating: Hard R.
Summary: This life is filled with hurt where happiness doesn't work.
Warnings: Sex, violence, adultery, abuse. It's hardcore, really. 14 years old who don't care about NC-17 warning, GTFO okay?
A/N: This fic exists thanks to popular request, too much Three Days Grace

Comments

[stupidefleurk]

é_è cette fanfiction est tellement bonne que sa me donne envie de pleurer XI
J'adore le personnage de Jiyong et sa profondeur ,il me donne tellement envie de le protéger(contrairement à Seunghyun que je frapperais à mort sans regret).Je ne sais pas encore si il s'agit d'amour entre Jiyong et Seungri...D'un coté ,sa me parait inévitable !Ils ont tous les deux besoins de l'autre ,aussi compliqué que sa soit :/ Ils se ressemblent tellement et Jiyong est clairement obsédé par Seungri et extrêmement possessif.Si Jiyong ne doit pas perdre quelque chose dans sa vie,c'est bien Seungri !
Franchement je vais mourir avant d'avoir la suite X_X

[dreamthenextday]

Ne pleure pas! D:

Et ne meurs pas, non plus. J'essaie de finir la prochaine partie le plus vite possible.

[ellie_eunnie]

ohhh now I get it, it's the same fic only from Ji's perspective, right? XD
I love it so far <3~

omg the tall man's Top...*stares into space* uhhh I'm liking this *goes back to reading*
ohh whai is Seunghyun so evil? I'm so curious now...post faster? XD *lurks*

[dreamthenextday]

Exactly. :D Girl is smart. *pets*

looooool you didn't get it? I really wanted to make him an asshole somehow, i don't even know. XD I'll try. Third part is like, 3/4 done and I think I'm going to put part 4 into it instead of having 4 parts. XD

[ellie_eunnie]

omg post fast *spazzes*
and have some gtop action too, even if he's evil? XD raepmuch?

[dreamthenextday]

lol I'll see if I feel like including badass TOP in there too. XD lol you're almost as perverted as me

[kwonjiyongvips]

'Oh, Daddy... If I'm good enough for you, maybe we can...." The blonde pushed his tongue past Seunghyun's lips and into his mouth, moving it in and out repeatedly and imitating the movement that could be going on in a lower location..
That was just great O__O'

I love top's badass character here, Ji Yong's master XD and Ji Yong is Seung Ri's master :D
can't wait for the next chapter!

[dreamthenextday]

lol you enjoy slut!Jiyong? XD

Hmmmmm. Writing writing~ ♥

[kwonjiyongvips]

Uww you know what you should do? XD *fangirl*
You should write a .. like a prelogue of when top made ji yong a prostitute ^^ lol.

[dreamthenextday]

It's mentioned in the first part of Pain... though I do guess I can write it out... To the notepad mobile!

[kwonjiyongvips]

Yeah! That's what I meant! ^^
I speak ENGRISH you know :P so sorry if you sometimes don't get me :P
I hope you really try to write it out, thanks alot if you do ^^ <3

[dreamthenextday]

I try really hard to get out of the mindblock this fic gives me. D: I will figure out an ending soon.