Of sun, parties and cheap wine Chapter 1

[dreamwatcher15]

Chapter 1

Have you ever been to Sydney? I bet you have not. Or if you have been there, then you surely never experienced the best summer of your life like I did. But let`s start at the beginning. At the time shortly after I arrived in Australia.

My name is Kamenashi Kazuya, currently backpacker travelling up the east coast of Australia. I

Comments

[cutie_moody]

This one was hilarious!
I was especially fond of the carrying-Koki-to-the-hostel describtion.
Let's hope Kame-chan will find his stranger and the cheap good tasting wine.
Thank you for sharing. I had lots of fun reading!

[dreamwatcher15]

I really hope you got a big fat smille on your face after reading this, because that is the point of my desperat trys on beeing funny. ^^ Yea, I really tried my best with the carrying-Koki-to-the-hostel-scene so I´m glad you liked it that much! :)
I´m really glad you liked it and enjoyed it that much, and thanks a lot for the comment!

Of sun, parties and cheap wine Chapter 1

[agustin1982]

Interesting...xD I want read more...*HUGS*

Re: Of sun, parties and cheap wine Chapter 1

[dreamwatcher15]

Yay! *hugs back*
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. And I´m really glad you enjoyed it! ^^
Next chap should be up soon! :)

[eragon22]

Your English was not bad, but there were a number of typos and some missed commas and stuff but they didn´t hinder me from reading and enjoying the fic :)
The summary and concept seem to be really interesting, am looking forward to reading how the story evolves. Kame seemed a bit creepy, though, a bit Bella-ish with his immediate fascination with sleeping Jin (probably just me with my anti-Twilight views XD)
But yes, I did enjoy reading it and will be keeping an eye out for this fic :)

[dreamwatcher15]

Ok, you can only blame me for half of the typos because I nearly freaked out after my PC started writing like t-hi-o0-s after I finished half of the chap, and I simply got tired after re tipping every word x-times. So I was really not in the mood to check everything again. Well, and I ignore commas 90% of the times because I simply see no use for them. ^^ But I´m overly glad that you liked it and had fun reading this. And thanks for the comment.

And the Bella thing, sorry that it seemed to you like that. I actually find Twillight ok but I don´t really like Bella too. Well, I just didn´t know why Kame should be interested in Jin if he just sees him besides of his looks, so sorry for my lack of fantasy. ;P

And I´m sure you are going to enjoy this if you haven´t seen it yet. Well, I did! :D
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G2_UL69ehxo