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Fic: Shock and awe (1/2)

Oct 31, 2016 00:16

Title: Shock and awe
Fandom: Murder Call
Characters: Tessa Vance, Steve Hayden
Prompts: 006. Hours
Word Count: 2313
Rating: PG-13 (T)
Summary: There was blood on his trembling hands. Set post-series.

Disclaimer: I do not own the characters. They belong to Jennifer Rowe, Hal McElroy and Southern Star. I make no profit out of this.
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pairing: tessa/steve, fanfic, genre: romance, 100-fic challenge, genre: angst, genre: het, fandom: murder call, length: oneshot

Comments 3

tempe_brennandr October 31 2016, 02:48:04 UTC

*flaily hands* that was brilliant!!! Mind you I thought the worst at the start and I was basically in tears (not to mention I was sitting in the waiting room of my doctors office getting odd looks from everyone) thinking that Tessa had died. Just the way you set up the whole scene I could see it so vividly in my minds eye and it just helped set every emotion into motion.
But I was grinning like a fool by the end! Great way to set up their first kiss! Would also have been good if maybe Tootsie walked in on it without interrupting them. I can only imagine! LOL
It was great to read something new from you, I'm gonna have to upload some of my shorts soon, I've written a few more since last time.

dreigiau October 31 2016, 23:38:13 UTC

Thanks so much! I loved writing this piece. It just came so naturally after a period of time where I've been able to write zilch, which has been quite disheartening. But now something's been shaken loose, which is why there's now a part 2...
Hope it'll make you squeal as well, although maybe not in a way that makes people look at you oddly. :P And I'm looking forward to seeing your shorts! I'm dying for some more Tessa/Steve goodiness...

anonymous January 15 2018, 00:38:51 UTC

Just re-read this and was thinking you should write a prequel to what happened... like how the day started out ordinary then turned to shit in a heartbeat. I only suggest this because it’s a little confusing what happened to get Tessa into the situation you’ve painted her into... was she stabbed or was she shot and who are the two other dead guys and who came wielding a knife?
Hahaha even if you leave the prequel on a cliffie, or something... I’d be looking forward to reading it.