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Fic: You'll never know unless you try (1/1)

Nov 30, 2016 23:07

Title: You'll never know unless you try
Fandom: Murder Call
Characters: Tessa Vance, Steve Hayden, Dee Suzeraine, Lance Fisk, Imogen "Tootsie" Soames
Prompt: 080. Why?
Word Count: 5250
Rating: PG-13 (T)
Summary: How many times hadn’t she wanted to buck up and capture those lips of his, just to try it out, to see if what she felt was real? Not ( Read more... )

pairing: tessa/steve, fanfic, genre: romance, 100-fic challenge, genre: het, genre: angst, genre: humor, length: oneshot, fandom: murder call, genre: hurt/comfort

Comments 2

tempe_brennandr December 1 2016, 17:42:01 UTC

OMG!!! This was #ClassicTessa!!! I just loved the whole build up and Steve being a complete mystery without us knowing exactly what he was thinking... keeping his cards close to his chest.
But the bit in the pub had me on the edge of my seat! The tension was so thick, you almost needed an industrial saw to cut it with! Then finally, we get the kinda awkward kiss! Hahaha love how you've written it like this, I remember my first kiss and it was nothing like a fairytale!!! LOL it was almost a shy peck that was intended for a cheek, but *someone* moved their head and lips landed on lips... hahaha kinda funny to reminisce about now that I think about it! OOOH I should turn that into a fic!!! There we go, our next challenge, turning our first kisses into T/S fics! Hahaha this is going to be highly amusing ( ... )

dreigiau December 1 2016, 20:24:48 UTC

Thank you so much!! LOL, you won't believe how nervous I actually was as to whether you'd like this story or not. I felt it was a bit rushed or overdramatic, but at the same time, I really wanted to get write something that felt as real as possible. And as you say, we've all had awkward first kisses! LOL. I remember mine was something along the same lines as yours... It was a hug that turned into a kiss on the cheek that turned into a real (hot, flustered and completely teenager-awkward) kiss sometime between class ending and the school bus leaving. I can still remember that giddy feeling! (OMG, I've just realised most of my T/S fics are about first kisses (and more)!! Maybe I'm trying to get something unresolved off my chest. Hahaha!) But yeah, maybe that should be one of our challenges. :D ( ... )