For some reason I can't comment on your other journal, so I'll put it here.
It's parse and contains only the necessary details. Or the details Sekiei would notice, which don't give a blow-for-blow description of the room or what brought him to that point exactly, but enough to truly capture his take on it. Which makes it both creepy and realistic. I especially liked this: "So you're still alive," he said, light bursting behind him like the sun, and when he moved in Sekiei could see the bright blue of his eyes, set wide and slanted like a fox.
I was going to put Genma or Kakashi in, but Genma's still injured and I doubt they'd let him interrogate prisoners while he's hobbling on casts. And Kakashi's still a kid and I think Yondaime would try to shelter him. Probably. Maybe. I don't know.
You also can use OpenID to comment on my other journal, actually. >.>
There're other fics I've just put up. "Breath" is the only one I'd just written , the others apparently never got posted when I wrote them, which is odd.
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It's parse and contains only the necessary details. Or the details Sekiei would notice, which don't give a blow-for-blow description of the room or what brought him to that point exactly, but enough to truly capture his take on it. Which makes it both creepy and realistic. I especially liked this: "So you're still alive," he said, light bursting behind him like the sun, and when he moved in Sekiei could see the bright blue of his eyes, set wide and slanted like a fox.
Awesome job, Drel.
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Poor Sekiei. :P
I was going to put Genma or Kakashi in, but Genma's still injured and I doubt they'd let him interrogate prisoners while he's hobbling on casts. And Kakashi's still a kid and I think Yondaime would try to shelter him. Probably. Maybe. I don't know.
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There're other fics I've just put up. "Breath" is the only one I'd just written , the others apparently never got posted when I wrote them, which is odd.
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