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[drexelnotm]

i wrote the first draft of my study abroad application today...i say my first draft only because i think the advisor might make me change it, haha, because it's not enough like an application essay. one part of it asked me about past experiences travelling abroad, and this is what came out...and i'm gonna post it on here because i've really never

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[acegikmo1]

It sounds too much like a college application essay. Too...artsy/artful, you know? I recommend focusing on one or two specific instances instead of the feelings that emerged from several very different experiences. And, is it not Welsh?

Hahaha, remember that Irish waitress?