Challenge #10 Weekly Drabbles 2

[dreximgirl]

Title:  Happy Surprise
Prompt: All 5
Word Count: 427
Rating: G
Original/Fandom: Glee fandom
Pairings (if any) Brittany/Santana, Blaine/Kurt, Rachel/Finn
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): None
Summary: Santana worries about the surprise birthday party she has planned for Brittany.

Comments

[lady_invidia]

First of all, this is a Glee Drabble that manages to incorporate all 5 prompts seamlessly, I am therefore bound to love it for that alone!

I love how Santana's love for Brit is portrayed in this. You get that she loves her, worries about not being good enough for her, but also that she's possessive of her with the last line adding possibly a darker side to her love. I can imagine that Santana would destroy anyone who tried to take her Brit away from her =D

Concit: the last sentence is missing a full stop, there needs to be a full stop after 'stop worrying', 'shift early', 'living room' and possibly more. There needs to be punctuation (possible a comma or a dash?) after 'pinned to his side all day'.

[dreximgirl]

Thank you! I adore Britt and Santana so much :-) Am glad you enjoyed.

Thank you! I am so rubbish with full stops and such in dialogue x