Fanfic: [CM] Deliberations

[drftngwy]

Title: Deliberations of a Sleepless Mind
Author: drftngwy
Rating: PG
Pairing: Hotch/Prentiss
Summary: She knows what it's like, falling into an infatuation with a man who can never reciprocate. One-shot
Spoilers: post-Omnivore, but pre-100.

Comments

[doctaj10]

very nice take on Emily's thoughts! Very very good for your first CM fic :)

There can never be too much H/P angst.

[drftngwy]

thank you :)

and I so agree. H/P angst is always nice.

[flameturnedblue]

I really enjoyed this - I'd love to see you explore H/P some more! It would be interesting to see Hotch's POV - is in line with Emily's? Is she more into him than he is her, or vice versa. It completely intrigues me, and I thought you captured Emily's POV very well :)

[drftngwy]

thank you.

I think you've just given me the motivation to do that, actually.

your words are extremely kind and have done wonders for my mood. :)

[_nextboldmove_]

I really liked that. The depth of Prentiss seeing herself in the case, seeing the connections in her own life. I think you hint that she comes to the conclusion that she’s no better than the eventual unsubs of the case. Anyway, thanks for sharing!

[citymusings]

Great first fic!!! Interesting look at Emily. :)

[intodarkness85]

nice first fic!!! maybe you can do another part to it where prentiss tries to get close to Hotch...maybe?

[drftngwy]

thank you.

I've been trying without avail to do that, but maybe an upcoming episode will help me... :)