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Solace of You - Part 2b of 4

Jan 14, 2010 22:11

Title: Solace of You 2b/4
Author: Dri
Pairing: Morgan/Reid, always.
Rating: NC-17( this part )
Summary: You run.
Spoilers: Profiler Profiled and a blink-and-you-miss-it one from 100.
Author’s note: Part of the universe created in my Four Tmes… fic, Solace of You takes place right after Waves of Energy, but can be read as a stand-alone. It’s ( Read more... )

four times universe, cm fanfiction, solace, morgan/reid

Comments 14

gothabilly13 January 15 2010, 03:01:28 UTC

HOLY HOTNESS BATMAN! That was AWESOME. really well written and terribly cute interaction before and after the hotness. Good job.

:) dri_br January 17 2010, 18:37:07 UTC

Sex in the kitchen wasn't even part of the script in this scene. I wanted then sharing a quiet moment, and all of a sudden they are naked and Morgan is ruining a perfect stick of butter. Shame on you, guys!

But I'm so glad you enjoyed the show :)
Thanks for the feedback!

edom56 January 15 2010, 03:27:30 UTC

Ok, can't really imagine butter being all that comfortable in your ass, but I can understand the urgency :D

This was wonderful and I am so looking forward to the next chapter.

LOL dri_br January 17 2010, 18:40:16 UTC

I didn't want to see any of that; they made me do it :) I wonder what it will be like for them to make toast for now on... Reid won't be in danger if drops a bar of soap, but if Derek ever asks him to get the butter on the lower shelf of the fridge...

Thanks for the feedback!

berryblue_girl January 15 2010, 05:24:15 UTC

Butter as lube! Gross yet awesome! Very, very sweet!

:) dri_br January 17 2010, 18:42:01 UTC

Those boys! Poor Reid. Can you imagine him getting himself... cleaned?:)

Thanks for stopping by, Sarah!

brittdavis21 January 15 2010, 06:56:41 UTC

Thats a use for butter I wouldn't have thought of. And a use I won't be trying. LOL! Great chapter.

LOL dri_br January 17 2010, 18:43:27 UTC

Me neither! It was all Derek, I swear. I just wanted them to share a quiet time in the kitchen. Those pervs!

Imagine the cleaning up! Yeah, totally gross!:)

Thanks for the feedbadk!

luderbude January 15 2010, 20:26:36 UTC

"Reid tastes like oversweet coffee and every wise decision Derek has made recently."

This totally sounds like s.th. you'd expect Morgan's character to think. I like both their character voices in this piece. And I love their intensity.
You really know how to convey their emotional struggles, especially Morgan's. Great writing!

Oh and yeah-hot, hot, hot kitchen smut. Butter put to good use.

You really know how to deliver powerful lines at the end:
"‘It's all you and I, pretty boy, all our doing. And so help me God if mamma tries to guilt me out of this!’"
I love how passionate and possessive Morgan is in this story, and that he's willing to fight for them, and also I love how he's showing Reid what he's feeling through actions. I have a feeling Reid needs that kind of reassurance.

Lovely chapter!

Thanks! dri_br January 17 2010, 18:48:14 UTC

Your comments are so lovely! Thansk yet again for letting me know you're enjoying this little fic of mine.

One of my main concerns is not getting Morgan's voice right. He is so intense, sometimes it's a struggle to put on the paper all the things that I think go through his head. I'm glad to know so far it's been okay. I hope the future chapters will read the same way to you :)

Thanks again and take care!