Comments | dria1029: fic: The Black Lie -1-

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fic: The Black Lie -1-

Feb 03, 2013 22:54

Title: The Black Lie
Author: dria1029
Pairings: ot5, implied! Jongho
Genre: Angst, Suspense, Crime, Supernatural
Warnings: Mentions of murder, death and pedophilia. Substance use. Language. Graphic sexual content.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: ‘A lie is a lie, whether black or white’ A lesson of “honesty is the best policy” is learned in the Shinee dorm ( Read more... )

pairing: jongho, fandom: shinee, death, author: dria1029, rating: nc-17, pairing: ot5, dark!au, angst, theblacklie, suspense, !fanfic

Comments 5

masterk3y February 11 2013, 20:11:03 UTC

I love it. At first I was like woah, cause the language you use was so flowery and over the top, but I secretly loved that too! >_> It evoked a lot of imagery in my head, and I love that. Plus it's dark, and there's really nothing I love more than dark fiction.

Getting into the more main part of the story, I suppose, I like how you lightened it up a little, but it was still very artistic feeling. It seems like you put a lot into the way your sentences flow and the words used. I really enjoyed reading it and I would love to see more, to find out more and see what happens. Please continue <3

dria1029 February 16 2013, 04:14:52 UTC

You think it is? ;_; Lol well when I was writing, I was trying to immerse myself into the Black Lie's character. She has existed and re-existed since the beginning of time. Aka thats an old biddy haha. So I was trying to...I guess sound like an evil old woman? Idk

/gushes and bows in thanks/ I do love that you love it. A lot. Tbh I did put more efort than usual into this, and I'm happy to see you are reeled <3 I'm updating tonight. Thank you~

imvus February 12 2013, 01:12:33 UTC

The description of the black lie is wonderfully sinister. I liked how you put all the senses into it so that you could not only imagine what it looked liked, but you can imagine how it smelled and how it would feel if it was in your hands. ( not that I every would want that.....ever!)

This a could make a person think twice before ever telling a lie (black or white)

dria1029 February 16 2013, 04:18:03 UTC

Yes yes! Even though its unsavory, I want people to get a feel of her. Because shes more than just a force. If I have to bring "idea" and moral to life, I have to give her relatable,tactile traits.

Also yes :))) Lol Im so happy rn. <3

hiloser04 May 2 2013, 20:42:37 UTC

Omg... what is this?
I want more of WHATEVER it is.
You're like... hella amazingly talented like omg, what are you to entrance me like this?
Every story I'm just DRAWN in.
Sweet baby Jesus