fic: Still My Child

[dria1029]

Title: Still My Child
Author: dria1029
Pairings: Jongtae
Genre: AU, Supernatural, slight Romance
Warnings: Language, mentions of sexual activity
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jonghyun meets his quite unconventional guardian angel
Word Count: 5,728
a/n: Dedicated to the lovely koukaiaru Its not much but yes, Iike I've said, I hope you found it just as sweet as you

Comments

[koukaiaru]

Oh where do I even start ;a;. First of all, as I've already told you, I really like your writing style. You're so descriptive yet poetic at the same time and I'm just... how do I words? I love this enough to comment as I read it again so here you go:

I love, LOVE the first scene when Jonghyun wakes up and sees Taemin for the first time, it's so vivid but realistic. I like this Burglaries from a few houses uptown, pawning the spoils and using the money to feed his… guilty pleasure turned addictions-if not that, then supporting himself through what his mouth could do with a penis. especially and how smoothly it flows to the next paragraph and yeah ;a;

I also love hon unconventional Taemin is with his plain cardigan over dark jeans and worn sneakers. and when Jjong's trying to figure out who the fuck Taemin is. Priceless.

(btw when reading it for the second time i actually cried at
Though he knows he’s far from perfect
He is trying to live right
He asked me to ask You, Father
Would you hear his prayer tonight? because I went al 'aaah

[dria1029]

;A; OMG THIS COMMENT IS SO FULL OF YOUR TEARS AND I DO NOT KNOW IF I FEEL GUILTY FOR CAUSING THEM and/or NOT BEING THERE TO KISS THEM AWAY OR JUBILANT THAT YOU LIKED IT SO MUCH EITHER WAY MY COMMENT IS ABOUT TO BE FULL OF TEARS TOO.

Well first, before I start, I'd like to apologize for the typos, especially near the end lmao. That really embarrasses me because its like...I feel people get thrown off from the story when the grammar and shit doesn't make sense. /hides behind couch, sheepish giggling

There was no question of how Taemin would look XD. I felt he had to fall in between-in the plain clothes to appear humble: seeing as angels seem that way anyway, and to not scare poor Jonghyun off his ass with the full, glorious 50ft wing span. But I made him really attractive (not saying he already wasn't ;P) just to indicate that he wasn't your average man.

LOL you and your urge to paraphrase the entire thing awww <3 oh the parts that were italicized and bolded are from a real song. Its one of my favorite gospel songs and it sounds

[koukaiaru]

yeah i actually did catch the cause and effect, i was just so full of feels after i read it that i think i missed half of what i wanted to say, but yeah it was very distinct ^^ and i love how you made it all connected, and how taemin reappeared cause of that, and how you sneaked minho in there xD

and yeah to be honest i didn't cry when i read it the first time but when i reread it i really felt like i understood it so much more (i think it's always like that haha, when you know what's going to happen later you notice all the stuff that is hinted before, and then, because you remember - it gets to you; at least that's what i've always thought).

and yeah i'm definitely a proof that you don't have to be christian to appreciate it xD

and ahhh the joonew, i'm gonna get to it as soon as i finish with the big bang thing, i promise ;a; i actually dreamt the plot the other day, i already have a title for it lol xD just... no time ;a;

and shataaaaap i'm so not cute ;;a who's cute, you're cute ;a; /blushes

[jongtae_jikook]

This is so beautiful😍❤