Tuti Fic: Stand In

Jul 07, 2008 14:16

Now this is finished. Kind of took me by surprise to be honest, cause I wasn't intending to write anything very meaningful and I promise I didn't mean to get Daiki drunk! Or to imply anything about Wasshi's sexuality. Or to compare Eiji to any kind of illuminated machinery. But... I like it when fics surprise me ^__^;

Title: Stand In
Rating: PG13 ( Read more... )

pnish, writing, moridaiki, txn

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fencer_x July 7 2008, 14:24:50 UTC
♥ There are so many things about this I loved I dunno where to start. But I will say I love fics where the guys are all in relationships with someone already and joke about switching up XDDDDD

And guh, I really liked Tuti's explanation for not going, being scared he'd just screw it up, even if it was a stupid thing anyways :P I never thought about Daiki being kind of his buffer or stand-in, but it does make sense (like with Kuuchuu Blanco)!

*claps* Brava~!

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analineblue July 7 2008, 23:36:33 UTC
I think you did a really great job with this. <3 I know I've tried to write something about this a few times, but it never really felt as right as this does. Tuti's reasoning makes a weird kind of sense here - I feel like you just may be onto something. *nods* I don't know, I've just thought so much about all the possible reasons why Tuti doesn't go to this or that, and it never seems to make sense, but I really liked this - I feel like it really sheds some light on Tuti... *__* Anyway~ Good job. ♥

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jazzy_peaches July 9 2008, 00:57:20 UTC
I liked this a lot because it was incredibly realistic. You can totally feel the guilt and fear during this part:

Because I can’t be trusted to keep my big mouth shut! Because if I go to a play Takashi’s in then he or someone else will ask me what I thought of his performance and I’ll screw things up. Again!’

Oooooh Tuti *wibble*

And it doesn't have a nice sitcom ending, which I think is a) hard to pull off well, which you did, and b) what makes it all the more realistic. So well done! :)

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