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[drinkwellwords]

Title: Chin On Your Knees
Pairing: Tim Kasher/Conor Oberst
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: "You finished the song with your chin on your knees like you belong." - Los Campesinos!, "International Tweexcore Underground"
Summary: The usual prose about drunken first kisses.
Word Count: 622
Disclaimer
Notes: For __didntthinkso and _poetic_harlot_. Not as bad as I'd thought it could be.

Comments

[tricky_slip]

you are hands down one of my absolute favorite writers ever.
everything about this was just stunning... absolutly everything.
i love how tim thought about conor's brother's reactions, how he had to reason it out in his mind, and how conor made the decision for him in the end.
it was sweet and honest and everything i've come to love from your writing.
and the little details make me melt so bad
like how conor tastes of whiskey and apples...
gah.
i love this story.
♥

[fedradiowires]

Well, thank you so much. I'm so glad you continue to love this. Thank you.
♥

[_poetic_harlot_]

Okay. So. If Justin knew how bad you wanted his kid brother, you think you'd get a serious talking to. Or maybe you'd get beat up. Or hell, maybe he'd approve.

That is a priceless line. I love the age gap and how Tim is the one flailing about like a moron. Conor initiating the first kiss, too?

The fact that it was softer when Tim kissed Conor was beautiful. Absolutely stunning. And I am more than a little incoherent. Buttt. Nnn. Was it decided if this is part of your massive, amazing collection or no, haha?
<33 Fantastic job, love.

[fedradiowires]

Yeah, this is part of Have to Explode, which is becoming more sprawling than I ever imagined. I'm glad you liked that line. It was one of the parts I was more confident or not?

<33 Thank you.

[ninatron]

Aw wow, this was so beautiful and adorable. I loved it ♥

[fedradiowires]

Thank you so much. ♥

[sweetcupcake4]

-smiles-
okay stops squeeing it was AMAZING!!! I loved it...especially how you described Conor's skin under the lights
Whiskey and apple slices that was cute
I loved how Conor kissed Tim first and then he was nervous Tim didn't like like him
Details and imagery like this are love

[fedradiowires]

Thank you, I'm glad you like the detailing in my writing. It's occasional, but it is there.

[mandlebars]

well damn, just damn this is like the polar opposite of some words, with predator!jesse. this is just the sweetest thing-it's like a gift that you didn't know you wanted.

[fedradiowires]

Yeah, Kelly's my other half. We're secret opposite doppelgangers. Or something.
It's a secret.

Thank you, though.