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[drinkwellwords]

Title: I Will Be Grateful For This Day
Pairing: Tim Kasher/Conor Oberst/Jenny Lewis
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: fleeting
Summary: Jenny and you lay next to each other every night, and go to visit Tim during the day.
Word Count: 968
Disclaimer
Notes: This is the end of Have to Explode. It's been fun. I've had a good time with it. More parts will surface

Comments

[__didntthinkso]

I wasn't kidding when I said it was perfect. Everything fit with this, so incredibly well. As usual, your detail work and imagery are gorgeous. Jenny's dream, in the hands of someone else, could've felt cloying, but you didn't make it so at all. It was incredibly graceful, and I felt for all of them. And thank you, once and for all, for the happy ending. It just works. Much better than a sad ending could've.

[fedradiowires]

Thank you. I'm really glad you found the ending fitting, and I'm glad the dream worked. I'm really, really sad it's over, and that these characters are done with, for the time being. I wanted a sad ending; I'd planned a sad ending; and then it didn't work out like that. Thank you so much for all your help and critique.

[_poetic_harlot_]

My god.

I swear, you maybe used five adjectives I would say are explicitly emotional, and yet everything is packed with all these feelings that are almost a little crippling and just. Just NNN. Frankih. You gets nnnns, okay?

It's obvious enough how everything came together in some disorganized little package, a little ambiguous but absolutely stunning both regardless of the fact, and because of it. It's very open-ended and hopeful and beautiful and yes. How many times can I stick 'and' into one comment? Yeesh.

I need to reread the whole series D: Over and over until you start another amazing series XP

[_poetic_harlot_]

Snort. Why is that in italics? >_>

[fedradiowires]

Your code broke, obvsly.

[fedradiowires]

Thank you so much. I love you. You have been inordinately patient with me for years. And there's a happy ending for you. I'm so glad you liked the ending. I really, really am.

♥

[mandlebars]

oh wow just wow you can't hate on an ending like that, that was pure win.

[fedradiowires]

Thank so much.

[smilehostage]

i don't know why i didn't comment before. this whole story, it's so fantastic. i love the way you write, i can't even describe it. so much emotion conveyed by so little. i'm very, very jealous of your talent.

[fedradiowires]

You don't have much to be jealous of. But thank you so much; I'm really glad you've enjoyed it.

[sweetcupcake4]

Late comments-sorry
If this could have got any more perfect,you just made it that bit more.The ending was amazing,it was happy and they we're all together again just where they are meant to be.
I love how it wasn't in chronological order it worked really well,the insight into how each character lived in each different period of the series and the seperation from each other.
This makes me want to smile and cry at the same time how is that possible?The end scene is probably my favourite where Conor sits and plays his guitar and watches Jenny and Tim dance that was gorgeous, I want to say it was written simply but that's not the right word to use,the way you capture the emotion in those last few lines is beautiful and so vivid.
I think I shall have to go read this whole series again so I can take it all in again and read every single line over and over cause I loved this so so much
LO
VE

[fedradiowires]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it, and that the whole not-chronological thing didn't throw you. Thank you.