Prompt: Birds of a Feather- Titled: "Cut My Hair, Pierce My Heart"

Feb 02, 2010 18:37

"There are more important things than hair," she calmly says, her fingers running through my blond strands ( Read more... )

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watchclarewrite February 8 2010, 22:01:10 UTC
Lovely work- this short conversation between two strangers that evolves into something more. You've really captured the feelings behind both characters, keeping them from turning into pitiable stereotypes. Nicely done, as always :D

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sobitxx February 9 2010, 02:50:35 UTC
I feel like this is one of those "everyone has a story" sort of things. Like you just finding out the story of the hair stylist and yeah... I'm not really sure what I'm trying to say... O_O Erm, I liked the story though. *so awkward* xD

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drippedonpaper February 9 2010, 02:52:38 UTC
It's fine, I often can't articulate well in response comments either.

It was a good reminder to me though, that everyone is dealing with something. It's easy for me to get impatient with others, forgetting that they too could be having a bad day or health issues or something.

Thanks for commenting!:)

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quill_quirks February 10 2010, 02:03:02 UTC
This is a very touching story. I really liked it. :)

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