Prompt: Caged Bird, Titled: "No Bars Between"

Mar 06, 2010 17:41

She sits there. Hops across the small floor. Sometimes she sings ( Read more... )

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plastrickland23 March 7 2010, 04:37:20 UTC
Awwww...I love this!

"Three orbs snuggled, sleeping dreams." My fav line P.

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drippedonpaper March 7 2010, 05:12:33 UTC
I am so glad you like it!:) You are the first to read it.

Thanks so much for your kind words!:)

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plastrickland23 March 7 2010, 05:14:17 UTC
It was great! So glad you made it to the next round too! My home game entry is gonna be an excerpt from my book. I am all set as soon as Gary puts up a link.
P.

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drippedonpaper March 7 2010, 05:19:47 UTC
I didn't. I "sacrificed" myself about 3 weeks ago (gave another player my Idol spot.) This is just a home game entry for fun:)

I can't link it yet, I guess, until Gary posts a thread.

I look forward to reading part of your book. Do let me know when it becomes something I can hopefully buy:) I'd love to read all of it!

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onda_bianca March 11 2010, 00:48:52 UTC
My favorite line:

"I see love that clips its own wings."

Nicely done. :)

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sharya March 11 2010, 04:51:37 UTC
I loved this entry! It is so nice to read one full of hope! Thank you!

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drippedonpaper March 13 2010, 18:53:50 UTC
I can't live without hope, seriously:)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting:)

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beeker121 March 12 2010, 22:12:07 UTC
This is very sweet, and a good lesson in always looking deeper.

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drippedonpaper March 13 2010, 18:53:14 UTC
In most situations, there are reasons for what people do.

Thanks for your comment:)

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lawchicky March 13 2010, 12:58:00 UTC
What a great take on the topic!

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drippedonpaper March 13 2010, 18:52:45 UTC
Thanks for your comment:) I am glad you liked it:)

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