"Home" (Naruto, Yondaime Hokage [Namikaze Minato] x Uchiha Shisui, #28)

[drivemyheart]

Title: "Home"
Author/Artist: yukari_rin
Pairing: Yondaime Hokage (Namikaze Minato) x Uchiha Shisui
Fandom: Naruto
Theme: #28, Wada Calcium CD3
Rating: K
Word Count: 829
Notes: For fujiwara_san, my wifey whom I love madly.
Disclaimer: Naruto and related properties belong to Masashi Kishimoto and related parties.

Comments

[fujiappletan]

but in the humid late July day there was no relief for his allergies.

*TLLY IN THE SAME SITUATION* only may.

&oh Shisui how I adore you, Though maybe father would not like someone who criticizes his habits to pay his respects. dfgjdfgj XDD

&some typos: I though to put it on his grave. thought right, and while she talking about being at home or somthing or the box being at home? I was kinda confused as if you meant to use "it" or "I" or?

last paragraph was kinda foreshadowing and ;___;

[drivemyheart]

OH MY POOR DARLING. *CUDDLES AND BRINGS YOU OUT TO JERSEY*

I knew you would love that line! I giggled over it when Shisui!muse fed it to me and she was quite upset that I reacted the same way Minato did.

Ah, sankyuu for that~ And I think I fixed the second spot you were talking about.

Yeah. *cuddles* Once Minato finally starts walking Shisui turns around and watches him but I couldn't fit that in. :\