"Death of a Nation" (APH, Prussia/Hungary, Germany, K+)

[drivemyheart]

Title: "Death of a Nation"
Author: Yukari_Rin
Series: Hetalia Axis Powers
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Prussia (East Germany), Hungary, Germany (West Germany), with slight Prussia/Hungary.
Summary: A wall falls and someone dies.
Rating: K+
Word Count: 3,290
Historical Context: the fall of the Berlin Wall and the reunification of Germany
Notes: First APH

Comments

From: Imouto-chaaaaaan~

[anonymous]

This fic is awesome.

I got so sad reading it. I knew you'd be able to get that sort of reaction out of me, despite how hard it is for me to feel as such during most fics. And, yes, I think you should post this elsewhere. I'm not sure where, though, because I don't frequent LiveJournal anymore. >3 But, other people should be able to read this~

AND SEE HOW AWESOME IT IS.

And for some reason, them eating the apples together was so freaking cute. >__> I decree that we shall have lots and lots of apples when I visit you in June, yes/yes? You'd better get me some freakin' awesome apples. :|

But, YES! Back on topic! I love the fic. You have to have more confidence in your writing abilities, because, it is epic~ -Hugs toward.- Prussia would be happy that he flickered out like that. He didn't die like a bitch. GO PRUSSIA, YESSS. -FIST PUMP.-

:3 Write moooore.

[Lol @ captcha: "squashy Washington" Yup. My mind went there, too.]

[drivemyheart]

u///////////////////////////u It isn't, really. *fidgets* I'm so tempted to re-write the ending. It doesn't have the feel to it that I want but I've edited the wazoo out of this all ready as you know and argh. I hope the other fics are easier to cut the chord for.

I'm super glad that the fic had the desired result for you, though I'm weird enough that I want to apologize for making you sad. *bricked* I shall cross-post this... tonight or tomorrow. *so anxious about it*

*glees* That's the scene with the symbolism, but I don't know if it's obvious enough that people will get it. And of course we shall~ Nice tarty green Grannie Smiths.

Thank you, Imouto. I'm glad you enjoyed it so. *hugs* I'll try to have more confidence, but venturing into a new fandom with this kind of word count is so completely foreign to me that I'm more anxious than usual. I thought he'd like that, too. No slow decay. And who knows, he may come back~

I will. I promise. After I finish reading my book, this cut's 30_kisses piece, a chapter for another fic

[fujiappletan]

t-this was so good.
i know it's blunt to put it this way but so IC!

i really loved:
“You mean you're able to?” she raised a brow at him.

“Oh ha haaa. You should know not to underestimate the awesome me.”

“My apologies. Go on, I'm curious to see if you were thinking anything of worth.”

the dialogue in this really makes the fic (to me), i love that. i really like the end how it is both melancholy but totally prussia.

guh wifey CROSS POST.

[drivemyheart]

Eh? Really? *wibbles* Thank you, wifey. I was so stressed over this, you have no idea. Your words mean so much to me. And I've posted it to the Prussia/HUngary comm, but now I'll share it at the main comm before I get lost in my book.

[marleyskittlez]

I... This is... so amazing and heartbreaking. Usually, I ramble on and on about stuff I like, but I just can't about this story. All I can say is that I literally love everything about it and it put me in the strangest mood.

[drivemyheart]

n////////////////////n Th-thank you! This was a beast that could not be tamed, so it had me all sorts of worried over its quality. But I'm glad that in the end it's enjoyable. Thank you, again.

[revoiment_hika]

this fic is awesome!
I-- I almost teary when I read this ; A ;

“Eliza... A country is nothing without its people believing in it.”
I really love that line. Gilboooooooooooooo ;; A ;;

[drivemyheart]

Ah, thank you so much! (Sorry for my late reply, I've been busy with an anime convention.) I'm sorry I almost made you cry, but it makes me happy since the story had its desired affect.

Hehehe, I think that's my favorite line, too.

[revoiment_hika]

you're welcome &hearts
and don't worry, dear

you almost made me cry, but that's what it makes it awesome~

yessh, now I used it as a quote in my signature~
eh, I can use it, can I?

[drivemyheart]

*////////////////////* I'm extremely honored you like it enough to use it in such a way. Of course you may use it! Thank you~

[rosetintedstars]

this is really really good. ;A; prussia is so awesome here, and i love how you gave prussia that line about the definition of a country, and all the small details. i love this. it's so real and beautiful. thank you so much for sharing this.

[drivemyheart]

I apologize for the late reply, I've been busy with an anime convention. That being said, thank you so much for reading and leaving such a nice comment.