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[drmooski]

That feeling of gliding through school mostly unawares and on autopilot hasn't been going away

Comments

[emilysguitar]

you didn't capitalize "i."

"If i can find a nickel," also, isn't a complete sentence.

i'm assuming in the first sentence you meant "mostly unaware" and not "unawares." there are no other real errors but it's kind of an awkward sentence and could probably be constructed in a more coherent fashion.

NOW GIVE ME NICKELS!!!!!

[featherspy]

"If i can find a nickel," also, isn't a complete sentence.
Also, "If i can find a nickel," isn't a complete sentence.

i'm assuming in the first sentence you meant "mostly unaware" and not "unawares." there are no other real errors but it's kind of an awkward sentence and could probably be constructed in a more coherent fashion.
the sentence structure is awkward and there is room for improvement.

Sorry.

[emilysguitar]

haha, hey, i wasn't correcting to be mean, i was doing it for nickels. and never once did i say my correction statements wouldn't have errors!

[drmooski]

how about i give everyone a quarter, and it will be settled.

[featherspy]

School is not painful, it just feels like those scenes in Garden State(italisize film name) where they going into slow motion and play slow(better word than slow?) indie music.

[zeldaaznmfa89]

How about "...has not gone away" instead of "has not been going away"? but that's just nitpicky.

"School is not painful, it just feels like those scenes in garden state where they going into slow motion and play slow indie music."

LOLOLOLLLL

[glorious_demise]

how about i sympathize 1800% instead of checking grammer OK!