This is the second part idk but i'm kinda scared of putting this up on SATD it's up on fanworks, along with another one, but... idk. And I'm sorry this is so short.
I know this is weird but like I said... I check the profiles of all the people who give me comments. Anyway, on with the comment!
Good job on your first fic. :D You started it off really interesting. I wonder if Ryan simply want a new 'him' because he's starting college or there's something more. So Brendon was stalking him on the plane? haha... But I wonder how he knew Ryan's family name since I don't think Ryan has mentioned it to him...
Hmmm... suggestions... well, I don't really know. I guess... just have fun with it. And since you're writing from a first person point of view, a lot of options are open for you to make your story more interesting. Like, I don't know, mystery perhaps? Or maybe take the opportunity to develop Ryan's character more... It's all up to you.
And yeah... I totally understand the nerves of posting at SATD but I think you'll do fine as long as you get a beta. If you're still nervous though, I recommend a comm that is more... lenient to beginners like us. It's discofiction. They don't reject posts
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Thank you so much! I just realised the little mistake with that... I'm putting it down to Brendon being a TOTAL stalker. As we know he is. =D I'm taking your advice, and I will put it up on discofiction. Thank you for commenting!
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I know this is weird but like I said... I check the profiles of all the people who give me comments. Anyway, on with the comment!
Good job on your first fic. :D You started it off really interesting. I wonder if Ryan simply want a new 'him' because he's starting college or there's something more. So Brendon was stalking him on the plane? haha... But I wonder how he knew Ryan's family name since I don't think Ryan has mentioned it to him...
Hmmm... suggestions... well, I don't really know. I guess... just have fun with it. And since you're writing from a first person point of view, a lot of options are open for you to make your story more interesting. Like, I don't know, mystery perhaps? Or maybe take the opportunity to develop Ryan's character more... It's all up to you.
And yeah... I totally understand the nerves of posting at SATD but I think you'll do fine as long as you get a beta. If you're still nervous though, I recommend a comm that is more... lenient to beginners like us. It's discofiction. They don't reject posts ( ... )
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Actually, I kinda like it. I mean, stalker!Brendon that is... hehe...
Oh, and when it's finally up, I'll try giving a comment ASAP. *crosses fingers for FC* XD
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