PART 4

Aug 21, 2010 13:08

part 4

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Like It Was Yesterday [1/?] anonymous April 29 2011, 08:11:25 UTC
Chartreuse petals fall from the surrounding Sakura trees as a gentle breeze plucks them from their branches. As they drift away - weightless and pure - the air is left with a sweet scent, not overpowering, but not at all faint. My senses swallow it whole, absorbing mid-spring for all that it is.

It’s a sign of new life.

It’s a sign of rebirth.

New beginnings.

Change.But today, it is a reminder above all else. Years of memories coming together, playing like a silent film in my mind ( ... )

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Re: Like It Was Yesterday [1/?] anonymous April 29 2011, 08:16:34 UTC
This already has me in tears!! (I can't believe that you decided to start off with something this powerful right from the beginning :D ) I love you guys for taking this fill, and I anxiously await the next piece

Thisbetternotbelike"WhyHaven'tYouCalledYet"byRinKagamine... I am going to be so mad to see my tears wasted on a happy ending >_<

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Re: Like It Was Yesterday [1/?] anonymous April 29 2011, 18:15:21 UTC
I like this. It seems to have a tragic ending, but i fell like it will be worth to read this anyway xD

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Re: Like It Was Yesterday [1/?] anonymous April 29 2011, 20:41:41 UTC
........YOU SAID I'D BE SURPRISED ABOUT WHERE THIS WAS GOING. WHICH MADE ME THINK YOU WOULDN'T PULVERIZE ME WITH EMO. BUT YOU'RE DOING IT ANYWAY.

I DON'T TRUST YOU GUYS AT ALL.

-sobs and clings to you-

CAPTCHA THAT IS NOT A FUCKING LETTER -kicks captcha-

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OP ;____________; anonymous April 29 2011, 23:36:36 UTC
How could you be so cruel!!!?!?!?

Oh my goodness, so beautifully written!

I would slap Shizuo if I could because he smoked despite having a heart condition!

Please do continue wonderful person ;___;

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Re: Like It Was Yesterday [1/?] anonymous April 30 2011, 03:03:54 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE, YOU GUYS *AWAITS FUTURE CHAPTERS* \o/

B-But "chartreuse" is a shade of green and I don't think sakura petals are green...? /timid

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