FILL (sorta)1/2
anonymous
February 25 2010, 08:39:07 UTC
I'm really not sure if this is what the OP wanted, but I tried my hand at it - I like dark, angsty stuff, however, it's not graphic. -----
He was surprised that he didn't hurt more. All he felt was a slight burning sensation, uncomfortable and constantly reminding him of what had happened but not enough to really be painful. If it was because he was still dizzy from the narcotics they knocked him out with and didn't really register any pain or if it was because - as they'd said - they weren't supposed to 'damage the cargo' too much - he didn't know. It didn't really matter, anyway
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Re: FILL (sorta)2/2
anonymous
February 25 2010, 08:40:04 UTC
After returning to the flat, his mind was a lot clearer from the cool air. By now, he would have preferred the slightly numb state he had been in, he was aching all over and there was no way to ignore the pain the slight burning had blossomed into
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Re: FILL (sorta)2/2
anonymous
February 25 2010, 20:08:57 UTC
This was as angsty and fluffy as it should be <3 You should totally write more het! (I assume you're originally a slash writer, aren't you?)
I especially liked the parts when Shinra was analyzing himself and was trying not to think about what happened before.
hey, it seems all the none-natives are coming out to write now XD
Yes ^^ Were you feeling too shy to fill something, too? Even I'm writing something. After yesterday's encouragement in the freezing request thread I made up my mind not to whine anymore about being ESL
Re: FILL (sorta)2/2
anonymous
February 25 2010, 22:23:33 UTC
XD True that, I'm originally a slasher (that sounds... kind of brutal. I like it!) - but Shinra and Celty are so adorable together! I couldn't resist. Although I've got to be honest, even while writing slash I very, very rarely write explixit smut, so, well, if it's mostly about character interaction, I don't really care wether it's het or slash as long as I like the pairing XD
I'm really glad you liked that part - with Shinra, I was really unsure if I got it fitting for his character @__@
Yes, shyness ^^'' Well, I've filled requests on other kink memes and the anonymity helps, too, but I always worry that the OPs might not light what I write and I'm afraid to disappoint them. I usually light to fill requests that don't necessarily ask for smut, though, and it's been somehow difficult to find something here LOL
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He was surprised that he didn't hurt more. All he felt was a slight burning sensation, uncomfortable and constantly reminding him of what had happened but not enough to really be painful. If it was because he was still dizzy from the narcotics they knocked him out with and didn't really register any pain or if it was because - as they'd said - they weren't supposed to 'damage the cargo' too much - he didn't know. It didn't really matter, anyway ( ... )
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I love fluff, dude. ♥ ♥ ♥
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AND SUCH A CUTE FILL I like your Shinra, so thank you SO MUCH
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I'm really glad you like it because I'm always so unsure if anyone's IC at all and all that, but as long as you liked it I'm happy!
(Also, I think this is the first story with a het couple I've ever written XD)
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I especially liked the parts when Shinra was analyzing himself and was trying not to think about what happened before.
hey, it seems all the none-natives are coming out to write now XD
Yes ^^ Were you feeling too shy to fill something, too? Even I'm writing something. After yesterday's encouragement in the freezing request thread I made up my mind not to whine anymore about being ESL
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Although I've got to be honest, even while writing slash I very, very rarely write explixit smut, so, well, if it's mostly about character interaction, I don't really care wether it's het or slash as long as I like the pairing XD
I'm really glad you liked that part - with Shinra, I was really unsure if I got it fitting for his character @__@
Yes, shyness ^^''
Well, I've filled requests on other kink memes and the anonymity helps, too, but I always worry that the OPs might not light what I write and I'm afraid to disappoint them. I usually light to fill requests that don't necessarily ask for smut, though, and it's been somehow difficult to find something here LOL
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I feel with you. I always fear that I'd dissapoint the OPs, regardless of anon posting or not :(
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