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anonymous
March 21 2010, 07:18:48 UTC
There was no preparation. Whatever warnings Izaya had to deliver he had already presented them with his wicked clarity of thought. No amount of bracing himself could have lessened the savage pain that shot through him as Izaya stripped him and plunged into him in one swift thrust. Tears blurred his vision but he blinked them away. He needed to see. Izaya did not even bother to pin him down, he simply let his rocking rhythm to paralyze Kida
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anonymous
March 21 2010, 08:15:29 UTC
Shizuo ignored the jab altogether. He waited until the blonde boy was fully dressed, wondering very briefly if Izaya had a thing for blondes, to approach him
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anonymous
March 22 2010, 04:47:27 UTC
Mikado walked to the school’s gate and Kida followed in an absent manner. Kida had not flirted with Anri or with anyone either and Mikado found it alarming. That was why he readily got rid of her and decided to walk home with Kida even if their places were on opposite sides of the city. Sundown burnished the surroundings in tints of red stained gold
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anonymous
March 23 2010, 20:05:09 UTC
*I really like dark!Kida so I will be writing more about him. And try not to get off character. I wasn't planning to add Mikado to this but it's interesting to see how he reacts to an unlikely change in his friend
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anonymous
March 24 2010, 05:02:38 UTC
Wow. . this fic has me hooked. Your writing flows so well. I really love the style of it. And the overall dark mood is just so well incorporated, being serious without being overly angsty. I'm glad you wrote Mikado into this, it's a great way to view what's going on through a third party's eyes and to make the changes in Kida even more apparent. I'm LOVING where you're going with this so far, please keep writing! Will be keeping an eye out for updates!
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anonymous
March 24 2010, 06:51:45 UTC
“What if people put the information you sell to bad use? Aren’t you helping people do bad things by sharing data? Isn’t that borderline illegal
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anonymous
March 25 2010, 04:16:52 UTC
Izaya stood out from the human deluge, effortlessly. Without making a fuss of trying to get anyone’s attention yet having all eyes on him nonetheless. Kida stood rooted to the concrete. Behind all the rumors the man was so much than he had even imagined. One that needs not try to make himself noticed, one that could blend with the shadows just as easily. Ikebukuro personified
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Then Izaya proceeds to pay him the next morning for his 'services'.
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Your writing flows so well. I really love the style of it. And the overall dark mood is just so well incorporated, being serious without being overly angsty.
I'm glad you wrote Mikado into this, it's a great way to view what's going on through a third party's eyes and to make the changes in Kida even more apparent.
I'm LOVING where you're going with this so far, please keep writing! Will be keeping an eye out for updates!
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