I loved this so much!! This seemed so effortless. The dialog echoed the characters so perfectly. McManus was hilarious. Cyril and Ryan were adorable. It was great to see more and more familiar characters haha. And then the end! Of course the best part was that constant sex-charged fighting between Toby and Chris. And some good unsolicited insight from Sean! Thank you for writing!
lol, I'm glad it seemed effortless, because this one was hard. I'm much better with the stories where I just throw problems at characters and let them muddle through in their own time. Actually getting them to do what I tell them is much harder.
I really enjoyed writing Cyril and Ryan; they're such a fun pair.
Thanks for all your kind comments!
S.
PS: Is this the same noisystar who's been commenting on A03?
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Thank you for reading!
lol, I'm glad it seemed effortless, because this one was hard. I'm much better with the stories where I just throw problems at characters and let them muddle through in their own time. Actually getting them to do what I tell them is much harder.
I really enjoyed writing Cyril and Ryan; they're such a fun pair.
Thanks for all your kind comments!
S.
PS: Is this the same noisystar who's been commenting on A03?
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