Fanfic: The Ruby Slipper Dilemma and a Secondary Tale

[drufan]

Title: The Ruby Slipper Dilemma and a Secondary Tale
Author:drufan 
Recipient: kristen999 
Rating: T: gen
Word Count: 5600
Summary: Now that they are on Earth for the foreseeable future, flying monkeys would be easier to deal with than moving an entire city from one place to another especially when a familiar enemy gets in the way. Nothing ever goes right when John’s

Comments

[kriadydragon]

Wonderful! Loved Sheppard using to goo to try and stop the goa'uld, and liked how you left it open for future run ins. Well done :D

[drufan]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. This was a wonderful experience.

[sgamadison]

I really enjoyed seeing Sheppard's connection with the city and the effects of the pink goo! Fender's hero worship made for a delightful outsider's perspective of the team. Very nice!

[drufan]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was a fun experience.

[kristen999]

I love me some hero!worship and Fender's affinity for our Colonel was really sweet. Wow, you packed a ton in such a small, intense story. The pink goo and ancient connection was a cool twist as was the goa'aul attack.

Thank you!

[drufan]

I'm glad you liked it! And Thank You for organizing the exchange!

[radioshack84]

Neat story! Interesting concept with the pink goo, and I loved how much there was going on. Between Todd, the Goa'uld, and the repairs, this was non-stop and a great read. Thanks for sharing! =)

[drufan]

Thank you, I'm glad it worked for you!

[sherry57]

Great story hon. The pink goo that is the way to beat the Gao'uld..loved it. I really liked your character Fender....maybe he'll be back in another story???
Really good adventure story...thanks for sharing.

[drufan]

Thanks! You never know about the OC's working or not. Glad you liked good ol' Fender.